pls fix fallen kingdom too

Omg this story’s awesome

Omg this fan fiction is so unique ! It’s unlike anything I’ve ever read before, I really really really hope you’ll write a sequel or something like that because honestly, it’s just WOW.

not gonna lie but for some reason I was waiting for Charles Xavier to pull up in his wheelchair at some point in the story lol

if claire had a mutant ability it would be her running in those 5 inch heels everywhere lol

x-gene so is this X-Men universe mixed with JP?

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

So beautiful, so great, I am in love with Liv. I love her character growth throughout the story! I am so happy for her that she's being adopted by Owen, and that she now has friends, and the support she receives from her Pack is just *squee*

I feel like all that help she did with her powers during the fiasco (at least the public parts) will really end up helping with mutants' situation in the long run. It is good publicity for them as a race; having her help so many people after that period of fright gives her a more "healer" or "superhero" image in the public's eye instead of the usual "monster" or "freak." Like, yes, she has powers, but she also helped save their lives, and they'll remember that. Her young age would also help her, I think; people usually feel better about unusual things if they have a feeling that THEY have some control over them. Her young age factors into this, as well as the inherent sexism in most societies, by making them (the adults and the public) view her both as someone helpful on the same level as a doctor AND someone they have "control"/authority over as a teenage/child.

OHMYGOD I CRIED SO HARD! I haven't even finished this yet and I am in love with it so much

This was a really amazing story, a very fun read. All the characters were believable, and Liv was just the right amount of overpowered ;). Overall, this was just a really great story.

this is the most unique story i've read for owen grady. love this keep up the great writing.

When you have watched Jurassic world 2, are you going to do a sequel to this story.

Brilliant! Loved every step of the way. Great characterisation and development.

Also, it was amazing of you not killing the raptors, it was one of the hardest parts for me in the movie because they were my favourites.

I've read this story I think twice before? And I'm still coming back to read it again because I enjoy it.
I don't often read OC stories, so the chances of me finding the good ones are slimmed down, which means it's very pleasing when I do read a good one. Which this one is.
(and more disappointing when I read bad ones. One time I read a story where a perfectly good plot setup was soured by the author vilifying a canon character so that their oc could date that character's boyfriend ;.)

I like how your oc has traits that some people bring up as overused and often seen in mary sues -
abused, has special powers, gets close to a main character - but it works! I think that's telling; a character having those traits is not a sign of them being a mary sue, it's how those traits are written and used in the plot.
When a trait is used badly (abused character showing no signs of abuse, special powers being able to fix everything with no trouble and removing any possible tension), it leads to a worse story, but when a trait is used WELL, like in this, it's much more engaging and interesting to read!

Jurassic world 2 is out next year, are you going to do a story about it with Liv in it.