So good. I wish you had finished this story.

Are you okay? This fanfic is such an awesome one, I really want to read more. Really original plot.

This is a really great story and I hope you will come back to it.

This is really good.

Lucius isn’t a good man, but he does have standards.

I have really enjoyed reading this incomplete story. I can imagine were the story is going, I imagine baby girl for the Malfoys, and happy endings all around except for a certain Headmaster and other nefarious characters.

Have just finished reading this for the first time and found it to be very good. It is a shame that you have stopped writing.
Hope you are well during the current troubles.

I hope one day the muse strikes again so this story gets completed. I have read it multiple times and it still entertains. I enjoy the humorous touches as well.

Great chapter and story so far.

Only one small typo in this chapter. You spelled Marge with a d instead of the r. I almost thought that you added in another sister for Vernon.

I look forward to see who will be getting married and who will be dosed with vetraserum, or however it is spelled. I also can't wait until Skeeter is caught out as an animagus, and an illegal one at that.

I hope that you'll be able to update soon.

I really loved this chapter. It was almost like reading one of my romance novels. Except changing the main characters of the book for Narcissa and Lucius.

I try not to nitpic but I was so wrapped up in reading this story that I didn't mention one small error. Not sure if anyone mentioned it or not. But, in the chapter where Harry got his owl Hedwig was referred to as male instead of female. Other than that I might notice the other little minor spelling and grammatical errors but they don't take away from the story. Have you thought of not allowing the anonymous reviews? Just some food for that with that.

Sorry for the, probably, weird review. Anyway, I really look forward to reading the rest of what is posted.

I liked reading this story and, as it has been almost 4 years since the last update, I'm somewhat sad to see this discontinued. The good work up to here, however, is very much appreciated.
The character work feels very well, and the plot is fun.
All in all a very good story.

Maybe, you can find some more stuff for it in your imagination. That would be great.

Oh gosh! This is so good! I hope you find your muse again. This is the first characterization of Lucius as the twice-lived Wizard.I
I love his slow courting of Narcissa. The reconciliation of Andromeda and Narcissa was lovely.
I'm following this story so I can see where it goes. Thanks for sharing!

Oh, I could cry. I was really hoping we’d get to the ball before running out of chapters. I was *really* looking forward to seeing Madame Zabini show up dressed just like Hermione, but sluttier.

This is a great story, either way, and I’m glad I read it. Please accept a virtual bunch of roses and chocolate frogs in thanks for posting it. I’m following it, just in case.

this is awesome! I really like the changes you are making! Lucius is still his self but not!

Hi, I am loving the story. Read it in one go today. I was wondering if it is abandoned or does it go on somewhere else?
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I have enjoyed the plot of this story - as well as your others in which you re imagine the plot of the Potter books.

I know you have not updated these in a long while, but I do hope you will give them another look - there is a lot of potential here