Good for Francine.

Great story, love you.

I love the practicality of Francine's conclusion here, how she's going to handle it. Very nicely done!

Excellent! Loved it! Simple, easy read, interesting.

What a great little story, with a wonderful twist at the end.

That Lee would call out Amanda's name in his sleep, even before consciously admitting his feelings was spot on. He'd deny it, even if Amanda had been the one to overhear it.

For a first story, this was terrific. Brava!

Great job for your first story! Loved it, you fooled me for quite a bit of it! I love the look into the thinking of Francine about Lee and Amanda! I really enjoyed it! Can't wait for more!

Ah ha! You are great at these. You think you know but nope...I hope to read more. PLEEASE

Very clever! I really enjoyed this. :)

Very clever! You had me all immersed in the story all the way to the end.

Really good story. Thought it was Leslie, had no idea until towards the end - Great set up.

Oh boy - I LOVE this! Especially the very last part, after the last comma. Yah, that's Francine. :) Thanks for writing this story! And never mind the word count - for a great story like this, we'll just forget about word count, shall we? ;)

Great Job, I totally had ti do a Dibble take and re-read when I got to the Mrs. Stetson part because I thought you had been speaking about Leslie! I love stories that surprise me like this did. Hope to read more from you.

Good story! You had me guessing who it was. I first thought Leslie then I thought no not her. I thought it was Francine then with the girl saying Mrs Stetson if threw me off a minute and I decided it had to be Francine and they were undercover. I can't believe that he called out Amanda's name and Francine heard it. Lol!

That's good, I thought it was Leslie until the end... good job!

Great job! I hope we see more from you.