Sherk is funny i rate this 6 stars.

This would be the first time I've left a review on probably ANY fanfiction I've read online, but this is what I have to say: Holy. Freaking. Moly. This was just amazing. I have so much to say I'm just going to summarize the things that stood out most: 1: I especially love how, as another reviewer said, you didn't make Plague Knight, as I would call it, "conventionally handsome." It makes sense that, because he's an alchemist, he'd be more than a little banged up from all the stuff he's done in the past, and Mona's reactions to his taking off the mask were just plain adorable and made the whole thing more charming. 2: Unrelated to the plot, the wording of this fanfiction makes it easy to read (for me, anyways) while not being at all bland at the same time. This style is exceptionally rare on the internet, in my experience. 3: The kiss scenes. The detail in which you described these is just... I can't take it. The sweetness is too strong. I also think it's hilarious and yet appropriate that Percy rudely interrupted them in the middle of their makeout session.

So that's all I can say without this turning into a full-blown novel... Hope this fanfiction isn't too old to leave a review on.

This is some of the most adorable fluff I have ever had the privilege of witnessing. Thank you.

That was very well written and presented amazingly. I look forward to reading your other stuff.

wow, this is so... adorable. The amount of detail you put into describing their feelings to each other is amazing.

This is so cute.

This is completely adorable, and definitely in line with the game itself. Plague Knight and Mona are my new OTP. 3

Sigh. such a beautiful blissful emotional magical and yes, alchemic work.
wonderfully written. is there more?
I can't believe no one else has left their thoughts.

is there any more to this? Please i wanna read more i love this ship!

Holy cow, your writing skills are the most impressive thing I have ever seen! The descriptive beauties I find in this story had me giggling and smiling, and that is not a thing I normally say about most fanfiction.
This was adorable and pleaaase continue!

The best Plague and Mona fanfiction I've ever read

I enjoyed this a lot. It was well written, sweet and seemed perfectly in-character.
What I especially enjoyed was the fact that you didn't turn Plague Knight into some sort of bishie-boy or rugged handsome macho. He is an alchemist and his name is Plague Knight. He should look like someone who regularly blows himself up with highly virulent crap. He should look frightening to anyone who has no idea of what he does on a regular basis but alluring to people of the craft.
Good job overall.

Wow, this seriously gave me an incredible amount of feels. It looks like I have quite a lot to live up to in my story if I want to match your standard of descriptive wordplay and characterization.

Seriously, this is so heartwarming and amazing, and I simply love these characters so much. Thank you so much for writing this!