this story is really interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.

This is just terrible done. You let a weak youkai influence a kyuubi who has the power over illusions being caught in an illusion?

Besides that was done within a day? Your whole plot is just the same like any others without any thought of putting your own ideas in.

Your OC was very poorly done. Weak character and a insult for the Kyuubi legends. Then Naruto is poorly done if he couldn't even see through the illusions.

This is bad. Garbage and just poorly done. If you write stories like this then you can expect reviews like these

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Not to be that Person, but even if this is a Different Naruto, Him by himself would Cream Tsukune in seconds, When it comes to it Naruto Characters are just Stronger then The Monsters of Rosario Vampire

Continue?

Very good so far i and I am curious to see more of this to see how it turns out

can't wait for the next keep it going.

i coud be wrong but does tsukune act like sasuke in a way moving on it seems interesting keep it up.

Nice work plse update soon

Needs some work. I feel like it could be better if you slowed down and really thought before typing out chapter and take into account of f character personalities cuz right now it seems a little too flawed for my tastes.

U got the dialogue but not enough description of the fights or any of that stuff hats very important to any story.

okay

Love the start

ok

I like it