Please continue this story!

That was beautiful! I love your style of writing. And i am speaking as someone who just read your story in the last hours straight and is now overwhelmed with feelings. Thank you!

This is amazing! I love how you wrote the masquerade, making it unique but still keeping original. I'm very excited to see how Luna and Thomas deal out their problems. You're doing a great job, can't wait to read more! :)

Loved the tension between Luna and Thomas in the hotel room scene in the latest chapter

Thank you for your story! It's incredibly well written! And we are now at the masquerade ball, OMG! Please, keep on writing and post next chapter sooner than the last one, please! Happy holidays!

Loved this chapter

Omg! You updated! I love this fanfic and now it’s time for the masquerade ball! I’m so excited, please don’t make me wait so long again!:D

I'm so glad to see that you are back to posting :) this was my favorite chapter so far!

Omg Luna is back! Yay! I love love LOVE this fanfic! I'm so excited for Hunt and Luna to finally realize their romantic connection;) Please continue!

Yay! You're back! This chapter was really nice. Keep up with the good work. Honestly, at one point I had no idea what was going on (I blame my rushed reading) but it was wonderful when I put the pieces together. Also, I recommend you put a line or anything you want to separate scenes so the reader can read smoothly. Of course, it's your choice and I will still read the story no matter what happens. I can't wait for the next one! :)

Great chapter as always. Love how the relationship between them is growing.
As far as romantic things, I think you should keep the later dates, except maybe change like the first three. Their first kiss could be somewhere more natural. Them Thomas could try to avoid Luna because he's frustrated or something idk. I know whatever you do will be really good tho

Completely stopped when I saw this, my characters name is Luna as well!

Great chapter! Love the dynamic of Luna and Hunt

There aren't many retellings of the whole story and it is very hard to do with all the analysis and even harder to do well, yours is so good and it just makes me laugh when Hunt gets mad. When will the next chapter be coming out?

Yikes! Hunt is so mean in this chapter! :O If he's THIS mean now, I'm almost scared to imagine what Priya will be like XD Will Hunt and Luna be texting/calling each other anytime soon? My prediction is that Hunt will be the first one to initiate contact, but we'll see... :P