love it.
please write more soon.

Please write more for it!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Update/Continue when your able please.

First name: Holly
Last name: Stark
Title: The Celestial Queen

kind of heasitant now.
don't get me wrong, some short chapters are ok, but most don't move the story along. and many authors start doing short chapters that they say will be updated weekly, but after a while, go longer and longer between updates, but keep the chapters short.
i'm not doubting your ability as an author, but short chapters can easily kill a story for me.
i am willing to give it a chance.
sure i would perfer longer chapters and have a longer wait, than a short chapter and a quick update.
again, i'm not doubting you, i am just cautious

And locking away her memories and powers might also make her hate them for doing so and she might turn on them it seems like everyone has their own manipulative old man. Maybe if he just asked she would agree so she could have a second chance, but no hes taking her choice. I do hope we get to see the results of her leavening kinda want to see how fucked up it all gets and james and dumbledork have no one to blame but themselves.

Cool 3 chapters continue please.

if she is going in looking like young miss rose she might as well use her name or one of the names from starwars
thou i have to agree with diddyk2345 on the nicname pandora cuz with the amount of diferent styles she can use you never know what she will use next

How about Setsuna Galaxia with the nickname Phantom or Spirit.

looking forward to next chapter seems good to me just a bit short

Isn’t she a bit too op?

First off, a brilliant variant of this concept
Now for my name suggestions,
First name: Fiona because it features Iona which has a major connotation with purple.
In the Celtic origin of the word Iona means "From the king's island".
Last name: couldn't think of one.
Nickname: Pandora -this is the name of the moon of Saturn, and with all the power she has she will be a force to be reckoned with (a pandora's box you could say)

Update please.

what will happen to the goblins