wow! amazing! every single line was perfect! I love this pairing and you portrayed them beautifully. I almost start crying at work. thank you for writing this!

Wow, your vocabolary is on point! Love, love, looovvvveeeee how you portrayed terrified Law and that 'always-e-there' Marimo like ugh why can't one of you just confess already (but where's the fun in that).
This one is long but I do enjoy every sentence, even every words, leant so much from this one. Thanks for this beautifully written fanfiction. Looking up for your next LawZo (or maybe, eventually, maybe, you're going to give Marimo a chance to be on top) xDD
Keep writing!

I love this fic, this pairing, but most of all I love the vocabulary you used! I hope to see abother fic soon

Wow! This is amazing! You have an extraordinary talent as a writer. The emotions were put so beautifully, and yet in a way that is completely fitting to Law's character. Bravo, I congratulate you!

This is bursting with beautiful prose and emotions.

Aren't you a genius? It is so good. Instead of telling what happen, you show them. And the pairing, despite it is not usual (I mean it's still rarely found) in this fandom, you depict them beautifully so that they give off natural connection, chemistry, that is so strong it looks like, well, how it's supposed to be. Thanks to you I might add this pairing into my top fav list, now. The story is nicely flow, I can feel the emotions. Oh, and you are amazing in using second person point of view, not many can achieve such feat. Good job!
Really, I enjoy your writings (I read the other too, by the way). and I expect many things in the future. I think you should write more ones like this. This is so sweet. :))

Woah, this was so great! I really love this, I'd like a suite when they meet again later. Sorry for my English but I'm French.