Will you be updating this story?

The main thrust of the story is great and seems to be going interesting places, but I just can't keep reading. This needs a major re-edit to put the words you actually mean in there, rather than the first thing that spell check recommended. Your writing is good, but you just need a beta to read it over for mistakes before posting it.

Yeah I noticed that tidbit sorry WhiteRose is not my thing

Best of luck on graduating man I'm in the same boat!

Like the ending AN it actually made me well hate sound like...forgot the word but well glad...I hate wording like that I don’t like demanding anything from writers it messes up so much like...ehhhhgh...rooster teeth

Gah what a bitch. This is fun to read

I’d rather fucking die like a dog to those last words but great work on this I know for the sake of smut not sure for future chapters but it would be nice to see a little fight back but meh Still great

Don't insult the gods you dum fuck

early congratz on your graduation.

Do what you have to do. We can wait. Anyone that says otherwise isn't aubergine you want as a reader. Focus on your studies keep your grades up and come back to us when you can.

go ahead and graduate the fan-fics can wait till you are put of school

This story is not necessarily bad, but some of the events, character interactions and reactions make absolutely no sense. Jaune is way too friendly with people who are essentially holding him prisoner, blackmailing him and poisoning him all at once. Pyrrha supposedly "claimed him as hers", but she does nothing to prevent Weiss poisoning him or all the other forms of abuse the others put him through. Also for some reason, they expected Jaune to know how to use his Aura when he didn't even know what it was. Where's the logic in that?

Sorry being late, about this review,

I like the additional characterization, you added more complexity and elements to them to how they perceive this situtation. Grabbing Jaune has had an effect on them all, and hopefully we'll see how they'll change him as well. Plus a bit more knowledge what their culture is like.

Pyrrha is a bit in the background here, I guess because you want to keep secret some of the stuff she knows, so if you want to pull her forward make her be more interested and connected with developing Jaune.

As for update schedule, do what you think works best for you. I liked this, but if you think a different method will produce better results go for it.

Weiss is full on gay for Ruby. So, she will never, ever, do anything with Jaune then? Just asking for clarity, they will not kiss, sleep in bed together, and especially not have sex, right? Meanwhile Ruby is deciding still if she will be gay or straight, essentially Weiss or Jaune? So her pairing is a toss up still?

I just found this story today and couldn't look away! I love it. I do enjoy longer chapters even if it does take longer to produce, but it gives people something to look forward to reading. Keep up the great work!