Reviews for The Krypt |
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Guest chapter 14 . 12/6/2019 Damn, those spider creatures were scary! However, I'm wondering if you meant "paper thin" as leather is pretty thick, while "pus" has only one S. |
subzerothecryomancer chapter 15 . 10/8/2019 Another cliffhanger! I can’t wait to see what happens next. |
subzerothecryomancer chapter 14 . 9/17/2019 Don’t tell me old Sparky was killed by dem spiders. |
subzerothecryomancer chapter 13 . 9/13/2019 This is one of the most chilling stories I’ve ever read. Can’t wait for the next chapter. |
BitterSweet Crazy chapter 12 . 4/27/2018 No! I didn't expect for them to find Sub-Zero! I can't believe it, but I hope he put up a hell of a fight before they managed to take him down. I miss him (or the thought of him being alive) already. I'm looking forward to another chapter. |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/1/2018 Farewell, Kuei Liang. |
BitterSweet Crazy chapter 10 . 7/22/2017 Those wolves didn't have time to play any games. I'm glad you got past your writing block since it seems like more things are beginning to happen. Keep up the good work. |
21 is awesome chapter 9 . 5/25/2017 I'm REALLY enjoying this story and I hate that it ended on a cliffhanger! Lust binged the story so I'm causght up and ready/terrified to find out what's coming |
BitterSweet Crazy chapter 9 . 5/18/2017 Yes! You updated! The other day I was thinking about stories that I haven't read anything new from, and this is the first story I saw when I logged in. It seems like the team is making progress, and hopefully they can handle whatever is heading their way. Keep up the great work! |
MKFAN 4 LIFE chapter 9 . 5/15/2017 YES! Thanks so much for the update! Keep up the good work |
fortess chapter 8 . 3/18/2017 Such a good story. But you' hvaven't updated for a long time. |
BojackHorseman chapter 8 . 1/2/2017 Fantastic chapter, as always :) Now, to answer your questions: I rather enjoy the amount of detail you place in your writing. You are excellent at capturing and describing the characters' emotions, thoughts, PoVs, etc. As well as being quite succinct, when it comes to the setting and characters. This is definitely one of the MOST descriptive stories I've read. (I do enjoy these kind of stories) These are just my personal thoughts, but I LOVE stories with descriptions in them (as long as their not too long and not too short) Nonetheless, this is still one of my favorite stories and you're an amazing author. Keep up the good work; I now await your next update |
BitterSweet Crazy chapter 8 . 1/2/2017 I really like how you describe everything. It's great, and sometimes I wonder do you walk through the Krypt and describe these areas while you plan the chapters because I'll read a part and think 'Is this what it actually looks like? Wow!'...Everyone's emotions are good, too! When Takeda and Jin were arguing, I could tell that there was a lot of anger and tension without you directly saying it. I like everything about this story, and now that they've found Scorpion's kunai, I'm ready to see how they react to it. I'm also curious about how Scorpion lost it in the first place, but that's just a random thought. |
fortess chapter 7 . 12/19/2016 I'm soooooo scared, I love it |
BitterSweet Crazy chapter 7 . 12/12/2016 Great chapter! I look forward to finding out who was calling out to Takeda. |