such a good story! I wish you'd update!

Please update

amazing

Next chapter ?

PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

are you bring Sai in early?

I was hyped to see this awhile ago since the original was one of my top 5 stories. But I waited so that I could read more in one sitting. Sadly when I came back to it you have seemingly dropped the story.

Love it. I can't wait until the next update and see what else you have revised. Good job...

Soo are you not updating this story anymore

Could you continue this fic please?

Yay no more Sakura...seriously she sucks

Ok, I've just started this and already there's a huge pet peeve of mine. The whole 'mob beats naruto' thing. I find it so damn annoying. Like the hokage might be busy but he isnt stupid, like just talking about the kuubi will have you executed, never mind calling them the kuubi,a no beating them. Like the entire thing makes no sense! At a young age naruto had anbu patrolling him too? Like I hate that trope. The worst thing is that your writing is actually pretty good! The story would make a lot more sense, and be wayyy less cliche if you changed that part.

Hmmmmn this isn't too much different. It's like I'm reading the same story but the uncut version with bonus features and extras or something. I'm liking that Tenten is mentioned more and may just stay in the story this time and become a known ninja threat. And maybe there'll be some more Haku. And us getting to see the other guys that like Naruko flirting with her or deciding to not pursue her cuz they knew Sasuke had her in his sights due to the sitting thing and whatever else and weren't sure what to do to compete I guess? Idk. Be nice to know what counts as Shino flirting in this story tho.

Plz update

Aww my poor sasuke. Dont worry darling you'll get the girl. And author-chan great story its AMAZING ! I love it. Plz plz plz plz UPDATE ! Your story is incredible plz UPDATE !