Gruesome story, but well written.

Gracias, excelente.

god i love the bad ending

oh and yeah really great read holy shit

this was awesome. While this Harry could be used in many many other crossovers. Heck his character could even cross over into beyond two souls.

I enjoyed it. It's rare that you have an intelligent yet ignorant Harry. With little to no qualms of killing. Even Naruto is the same. Killing is a rare occurrence, even if in canon, Naruto simply faced redeemable enemies constantly.

And again with the effeminate and cross dressing BS.

You are absolutely fucking retarded. I can't even begin to comprehend the level of stupidity that went into this fic. Alma Wade is basically a fucking demigodess on her own. She could have killed everyone by herself if she wanted to. Combined with Harry, who for some reason is every bit as powerful as her, and there is no way they should have died in the first place. That's just the tip of the iceberg. I actually feel bad for you, it must be difficult living as brain damaged imbecile.

Great story

... I just checked your work after reviewing The Bloody Ashikabi and found out you wrote this. LOL.

I've read this a few times after I got into FEAR. I liked this back before I ever played the games. (Played through 1 and 2 at the moment of this review) The only thing I have to say is that for all the written info about Alma, it doesn't put into proper scope just HOW powerful she really is.

both endings were prefect, i though this story would be a standard harrys a squib and get experimented on title, but the brutality and insanity with both characters was prefect, specially Alma
the story being longer would of been nice, like make them able to brake the dimensional barrier and go to different dimensions as in the last chapter you made them immortal quote "Even if they were stuck on Earth until the end of time"

thank the gods the bad ending wasn't bad

Albus royally lost the plot.

I am not sure which ending is better, the good or the bad, as they are both well written.

You truly have a talent for stories. I really loved this one.

By chance, do you have other xover of HP-FEAR like this? Or know about?

This was one of the best short stories i have read on this site! Thanks for being awesome)

Both your good and bad end were very... Well for lack of a better word... "Good" if you know what I mean... I loved both endings. The bad ending was like the first season of 'American Horror Story' about the haunted house how they all became ghosts forced the bad ghosts back and decided to scare away every living person to enter while raising their ghost baby who never ages lol