i love this story! please make the main oc Ashley now Aika have a beautiful baby girl!

Fun story. It almost changes my view point of team rocket. Good detail, and good length. Just try to update more often, if you can't then that's fine

Hey some advice, if you decide to make a Pokemon you will be targetted by a group of bullies who will falsely review your story. They go by the name "St Elmo's Fire", "Farla", "Reeds of Enki, "DLPxBeAsTxSnIpE", "Talarc", "thisispingas", "Act" and BeHopeful. It's best to block them before they become a problem for you. Do not talk to them either for as they will send your PM down over at their blog.

Why they do it is rather simple. They think they know better then everyone else. Better to block them. Also spread the word and warn others.

Be warned AshxSeleneWriter may appear and spread lies. As is her nature being triggered.

Okay so... You have nice writing skills! And imagination beyond me... So are you accepting OC's? If you are please PM me at my other, account :

Nyxn Shadows

Well if not, let's just be friends!