This is really good so far but doesn't she have to be ladybug to use her yoyo?

I get the significance of Oleanders and Belladonnas but I feel like the hospital would refrain from giving previously comatose patients such poisonous flowers so soon haha. Still, nice use of symbolic materials.
Absolutely loved the story despite me having seen it around 4 years late.
Thank you so much for putting so much thought into the story and taking me on a ride!

HO HO HOOOOOOOOOO THIS IS GETTING SPICYYYYY! This is like the fourth time I have read this book, it is so good! 3

Holy shit I love that

Wow! Your fiction was really really awesome! I hadn't read fiction like this! I think you got your idea of draining the life energy from Ben 10 : Alien force, don't you? If it was original than I appreciate it. Great work seriously. Keep writing these types of fiction.

Is Hector an akuma?

Amazing work!

Love it!

Urgh they’re so oblivious.

THIS STORY WAS AMAZING! I was on the edge of my seat the entire time! keep up the good work! :]

Uhmmmm, doesn't she have to be Ladybug to get her yo-yo?

Loved it! I had to finish it in one setting. I wish there was more.

This is such a great story, the quality of writing here is fantastic. I loved all of tikki’s scenes, she felt like Marinette’s best friend not just et Kwami, beautiful work and keep on writing!

OMG, this fiction is amazing. It is a reall suspense, I am really scared while reading it not a feeling I often have while reading a book. You describe the cornering of Marinette by Hector so well...

Oh my gosh! I am so incredibly impressed with this story. So impressed that I read it in one day (Hence I'm still up at 3am finishing!) I just wanted to commend you, this story was a slow building horror that eventually came to a happy resolution. I was so pleased to see how it progressed, and also to see the way that Hector manipulated all the others to his advantage. Also the quality of your writing is simply superb - I mean I found a few grammatical errors, but the content is so impressive, so well thought out and so very interesting that it simply sucked me in! Also I very much appreciate the ending and how you tied it up, I think that you really showed a true difference between 'Hector'and Henry, and I appreciate that he also seems to be on track for a happy ending. Certainly I can see how finding out what he did was hard for him. Finally, I think that the way you finally tied in the title was wonderful, it not only left it till the end making that final realization, but it also gies a deeper more thought out feel to the story than it had, even before.
Overall, you've make something incredible here and I am very excited to see about reading some of your other fics.
Sincerely,
Bubblekins1010