I'm sobbing over here! Why did it have to endddddddd *hiccup* I fell head over heels for this story and it is so painful to watch it end! And I will be so freaking pissed if I'm not allowed to comment because I commented on a previous chapter

Tho is so beautifully written that I just don't know what to say. I was partially mad at chat for him springing it on her without warning or consideration of how she might have felt about being asked or put on the spot in front of thousands of people but I was also mad at marinette for being harsh about it and I feel so happy that she able to realise how terribly she had treated him even if she needed a nudge from tikki. I love how the story is moving or progessing at a normal rate. Not to slow and suspenseful yet not to fast or rushed. I love the character developnent and I just have to say that it really is beautiful. I almost cried! It feels so realistic and I feel like I'm actually sucked into the story. It pulls at my heart strings and I just love that.

Oh god I just realised I wrote a paragraph I'm so sorry

Thank you for a sweet story!

Amazing! completely enthralling! You wrote an awesome story! The way the characters went back and forth with their feelings was such whiplash and I WAS DYING! You really did such a wonderful job, thank you for this piece of art.

just a thought; but why not make a 2nd story as a minor follow up to this one.
showing how everyone reacts to seeing Adrien and Marinette together: especially Adrien's dad!
can you IMAGINE!?

I think this chapter (the A/N the end, especially) shows just how well you know these characters.
when you were explaining what Chat Noir's reasons were for hesitating w/ kissing Ladybug, I found myself thinking "finally, someone who gets it!"
soo many seem to misunderstand a lot about why these characters do what they do.
i.e. ppl think Adrien doesn't feel the same way toward Marinette as she does to him, the reality is that he just doesn't know. He just doesn't see it coming. I see SO MANY PPL MISS THIS!
I mean, look the Ep. Onii-chan in Season 3.
he heard Kagome liked him, he was soo thrown off she actually got a hit on him because of this.
check it if you deny.

DAMN TIKKI! why don't you take a sledgehammer to Mari's head while you're at it?
I mean talk about ruthless.
that was, hands down, the cruelest thing I've ever heard come out of Tikki's mouth!
it was totally deserved though. i'm liking the whole "reap what you sow" act you've got going on between Marinette/Ladybug & Adrien/Chat Noir.
props on another great chapter.

the part that dealt with Marinette and Adrien not being late was made fairly clear.

if you're having trouble choosing which idea to go with: why not do them all.
You can never have too much of a good thing.

props on the artistic expression.
ps. yes. it is called a love square.

as far as crushes go, I remember the 1 time I confessed to a girl I liked for several years, she confessed to having a thing for me: that threw me off so bad, I was standing there for a good 3-5 minutes. I seriously NEVER saw this coming. I was positive the feeling WASN'T mutual.
that said, this Chapter was F***ing HILARIOUS!
MAD PROPS!

i'm gonna bust a gut if Chat Noir and Ladybug talk and he found out she's going to the same movies as him with the guy she likes and he learns that they're seeing the same movie.

you know, they have Miraculous Ladybug on youtube now. FYI.

okay, now I'm more relax.
Oh my god, for a minute I hated you a little bit BECAUSE I thought that Marinette and Adrien were going to start a relationship immediately, but after, I finish the fic and I realize that they only are going to start to date, no a relationship and that is more, idk, objective(? because Adrien love ladybug, not marinette (even they are the same person but in front of him, they are differents) so they had to start to know each other better annnnd I'm writing so much sooo as a sumary... I LOVE YOUR STORY, YOU'RE AWASOME :)

p.d: I post this on chapter 9 bc FF didn't allow me posted this on chapter 11 for my first review :(

NO WEON, COMO ESTA WEA ES ASIIII. NO PUEDE MARINETTE PERDONARLO ASI COMO ASÍ WN, EL TIPO LA RECHAZOOOOO, QUE ONDAAAAAAA, AL MENOS ALGÚN TIPO DE "HEY CTM, ME PATEASTE PQ ESTABAS PENSANDO EN MI OTRO YO, QUE EN REALIDAD NO ES MALO PORQUE SOY YO PERO... AAHHHH DETESTO ESTE SHOW, ME HACE QUERER ODIAR A ADRIEN POR SER TAN CIEGO Y NO NOTAT QUE MARINETTE ES LADYBUG, NO SE DA CUENTA QUE ELLA ES MARAVILLOSA Y LA TERMINA Y AHHH QUE RABIA
probablemente nunca leas este comentario PORQUE está en español ( im forme chile and i can read in english, i love your fic btw) ndkdkxkq ay my feels, i love you