Holy heck this made me cringe in how awkweird it is but like I wouldn't change this for the world? It is so well written and just so Miraculous Ladybug that I love everything about it. Like wow, several times you just had me shell-shocked with how eloquently written you wrote this.

Some of my favorites being: "two kids just doing their best behind the safety of rubber masks", the whole flame thing, also the "it's...not a very Ladybug thing to say" followed up with the "and Marinette Cheng would stutter. And Adrien Agreste would probably (read: definitely) wait half a second too long to deliver his next line." And like pretty much everything about this.

It's awkward. It's weird. It's exactly how life would really be like for them to reveal to each other. And just like Adrien, I wouldn't want it any other way. :)

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You did a great job making me cringe many times during this fanfic. Good for you, bad for me.

It's pretty true that one reason it's so easy for Chat Noir and Ladybug to be in sync is because they're always fighting something, always in the middle of something, and that means they can focus on what they're doing instead of their feelings or any such awkward things. Good point. Also, I like how Adrien here had already begun to notice Marinette, even if the one he is in love with is Ladybug.

Haha. I even felt the awkwardness between them. Good story.

Wow~

Oh, have so been there! Wanna get work done, but instead sit down with a favorite new show and marathon until I put the important stuff till the last minute. It happens.

I will say, this was a real cute fic. I like that you made it awkward and had Adrian inwardly panicking the whole time. Really hit with their personalities. I could see this as how they might discover the truth.

I love this fanfic and you should make more chapters of this fanfic.

lolol, it's great that they're weird and wonderful! XD

Haha, this is awesomely written and a beautiful little fic. I could feel the awkwardness between them. (Or, as you eloquently penned her, awkWEIRDness. xD) They were still themselves, but you showed how much their out-of-costume personalities was mingling with their in-costume personalities and how that seemed to be a painful thing for both of them to redeem. The idea that Marinette is falling for Chat Noir and losing her crush for Adrien is SPLENDID, by the way, and I really love it beyond words. Great fic! :)

I like how you didn't make it a super easy transition - it's definitely a new take on the identity reveal thing. (And don't worry - the writing's not stilted! :P)

This was absolutely adorable and wonderfully in character and I love how you handled all the conflicted emotions that could come out when their secrets finally come to light! The description was perfect too, this was excellent! :D

Aaaaawe yeah, I can definitely see them being super awkward and Adrien still head over heels hehe! Keep up the good work!

I should be watching my chemistry videos for class tomorrow, but instead I'm reading fanfiction.

Haha you're right. In my case it's "I should be cleaning up..." XD
This was really cute (and I love how you captured the awkward without making me feel awkward, too. That's hard to do so kudos!)
And I really like the way you acknowledge that it's not all going to be sunshine and roses when they find out, because the fact that one has a crush on the other's secret identity and vice versa IS going to complicate things. Like, it'll probably work out in the end (otherwise I reckon the collective fandom will go insane) but it's going to take time and effort.
So well done! Thanks for the read :3