OH MY GOD! I KNOW YOU PROBABLY WON'T UPDATE BUT DANG THE CLIFFHANGER

Why do I feel like Beca is going to run

Hi, i love your fic! Surprising ship Beca & Luisa, I am looking forward to finding out where this is going:)) I don't know if the accuracy of your translation is of high importance to you, reading the fiction is entertaining and fun either way, but i thought if you wanted to know, i re-translated the things Peter (this is how we write the name in german) and "Luisa" say:))
"Ruhe" is correct, but uncommon, more frequently used would be: "Sei leise", "Halt die Klappe", "Halt den Mund" or if she is swearing lightly "Halt die Fresse"
"Sie sieht aus, wie eine verängstigte Maus"
"Glaubst du, dass sie obdachlos ist?" (do you think, she is homeless?) or "Glaubst du, dass sie auf der Straße lebt?" (do you think, she is living on the streets?) "Sie" is a formal way of saying "you" (you'd use it with your teacher or any grown up, that you don't know, but between equals, colleagues and friends, one would use "Du")
"Was denkst du?"
go on writing fics like this, it is well written and unafraid of letting the characters be lifelike, i enjoy it very much

IS THAT WHAT? Oh my god what a cliff hanger to end this one! And did they ever prosecute the foster father? Also! Jesus angst!

Please continue please please

Please, please, please update! I'm reeeally hooked!

Aww I love this story! Read it all in one go! Awesome job :)

please continue please i really love this story

Oh man, you're good at this. I hope you come back.

Woah that was intense! XD and awkward

Oooh this is going to be interesting

I'd probably go with "Was denkst du?" rather than "Was denken sie?" since "sie" written with small 's' indicates more than one person being addressed...
Other than that and then some, the story seems fairly interesting :). I'd say to keep it up :)

Hey! Me again :D
Nice story! Really! I like it.
But you have 2 more mistakes: Chapter 2: Du denkst sie hat kein Zuhause?
AND: Chapter 4: Was denkst du?
AND: Chapter 12: Wie spät ist es?

Hey! I am an austrian girl and so i speak german - you made a mistake in that sentence: She looks like a scared mouse, because it should go: Sie sieht aus wie eine verängstigte Maus. I hope i could help you :)

more please :)