AHHHHHH I LOVE THIS *throws confetti*
*hands you a cookie* I can't wait until next time! This is a really nice story!

I pity Sanji for having to deal with a person like Luffy (with a bottomless pit to boot) when it comes to losing food...I would be nuts long ago if I were in his shoes...*shakes head* Also, it's hilarious to see Zoro out of all people giving Sanji 'love advice' (but for some reason I'm not surprised)...XD You just make me love the cook even more with this fiction. Again, looking forward to the next update!

By the way, I saw some part of the words that could use some corrections:

1) He just about kicked the door off its hinges: (He was just about to kick the door off its hinges)
2) ...only to find he was already too late: (...only to find that he was already too late)
3) Knowing Luffy, he might brake it. (Knowing Luffy, he might break it.)

I also think it sounds better to use "you should watch where you're going" instead of "watch where you're walking". Sorry if I sound like a busybody, it's something like a little habit and I'm still learning how to write better (though have stopped writing for some time..*sighs*) But good job to the beta, thanks for the hard work! *thumbs up*

~Celine aka HikariYugiYamiAtemu

Yaaay, thank you for the update! I really like reading neat writings like this. And you really made sanji discussed his love problem with zoro! That is priceless!
Please continue, ganbatte!

Too lazy to login so hope you don't mind..:P

Anyways, really nice story flow here, easy to understand too so just the way I like it. I'm a huge fan of this pairing so I obviously have read that doujin too, one of my favourites as well! :) I'm looking forward to see how everything plans out so keep up the good work! *thumbs up*

I think that it should be "other's daydreams" instead of "others daydreams" but I'm not quite sure, it just look odd to me..*shrugs*

~Celine HikariYugiYamiAtemu

Oooh oooh beautiful fic!
I think I found one typo but I forgot where it was (sorry, i am no help at all)
That aside, this creation is very neat, the jokes are fresh, and yees! I noticed immediatelly that you quoted Oda's words in SBS.
I usually like zosan fic, but I don't know, lately I got bored and started looking for other pairings. And this one is new and sweet and I kinda like it. I wish there will be another chapter.