I mean kinda cliche you know hero decks are so overdone archfiend would of been cooler

This story was amazing. You did an awesome job with it. I was able to follow it even without having watched the show before reading! I'll probably end up watching it now.

is "Elemental Hero Marauder" an oc card? I ask bc all I can find is Twin-Sword Marauder...

Just finished this story for the first time, and it was great. I hope that you might make a sequel to it in the 5ds timeline or something like that. I look forward to reading more stroies written by you, you are one of my favorite writers.

I'm glad you didn't remove this fanfiction too like others for I adore it too much.

Well it was a good read but i expected more HP elements i didn't like how short was alexis after rape part because i felt like it was made not important. I actually expected dumbledork showing up at some point and getting trolled but it was good nonethless. Also as i have seen on your profile that you do challange can i ask you to consider making a crossover fanfiction of harry potter with any fiction you want on the base idea of Red Packet Server where harry is gifted a phone and invited to a chat group with characters from other fictions and for example when people gets to know how harry is living they decide to help him (i don't mean every one of them) his age could be around 8 years old so he is old enough to understand general things or younger if you go for genius route. Also for the paring you can go harem or not dosent't matter but i ask for the main paring to be Luna Lovegood. Also i apologize for my gramar as i write on my phone.

Really? You make him rape Her ? This is really a shit story

Now that theme song is stuck in my head...

So we've cleared hes going to da, is he not going to Hogwarts? Or did you adjust the ages for that?

Now I'm interested, good idea, looking forward to more.

Great story. I feel like some of the chapters may have been clichéd, but that’s OK it worked out in the end anyway. I think that it would’ve been interesting to see Harry take on the other shadow riders, but I can understand if that might have made the story harder to write. Although I really would’ve loved to see Harry go up against the second shadow writer, I forget her name right at the moment. But that’s OK we got a wonderful story anyway. Thank you so much.

A wonderful story!

didnt jaden and yubel use a card called mispolymerization in the anime that did the same thing as fantasy fusion? also that is not how skyscraper works, it only works if heat was the one attacking if heat got attacked then im pretty sure his attack stayed the same lol

Hero deck really? i'm disappointed, its Harry Potter we have here, it should be a spellcaster deck. and since it isn't and HP is OOC, then you should've just created an OC.

I'm pretty sure someone has pointed out the whole Dark Fusion and Torrential Tribute error so I'm not going to get into it.