It’s cool to see June already integrated into the pack, in difference to other ocs, who are on the outside looking in and I love how she is unattached to anyone romantically, as it’s one of the first characters I read to see that with. It’s nice to see an average human, who already knows what is going on in the town and seeing how she deals with being one of the only two humans in the pack, but her martial art skills makes her stand out and does she know how to use ninja weapons yet?

Poor Emmeline, she may not know what she is, and a lot of blood being left in her wake. She is a sweet girl, who might be a supernatural creature known for being violent, which contradicts with her personality. It’s unique to see two different girls, one of them being from Texas and the other being from Scotland, which means they can bond with not being able to fit in the mundaneness of Beacons Hills and might miss their original home cities. I wonder if Emmy’s species will be revealed and whether June is this mysterious new incarnation of the Guardian legend Deaton is talking about.

This is a super interesting beginning! I think it's great how June is already part of the gang, and I'm interested to find out more about Emmy as well. :)

Ahhh yes loved this chapter so much! So is June a Guardian? I'm so intrigued! And I want to know more about Emmy for sure! She's so precious and tiny piping up with bits of mysterious knowledge ah I love it all so much. Fab chapter and I cannot wait for the next update! :)

WHY IS JUNE ON THE LIST?! IS SHE SUPERNATURAL?I do not understaaaaaand. But also how cute is Emmy please? She's just a little Scottish cupcake out to make friends, she didn't sign up for this life. I'm so in love with this fic bae!

I LOVED THIS SO VERY VERY MUCH. The last line, oh my god. What a killer. I literally shouted "noooooo" cause I didn't want it to be over. I am very invested and need to know what happens next. Also I totally adore Emmy and I a super intrigued as to what she is. She seems so sweet and innocent and I love her but then also second most valuable on the deadpool? Girls gonna be badass af and I can't wait for it tbh. Ugh this is just so great. Please update soon 3

Great story more and Lydia ass kicking is gonna be amazing

You should continue this so good.
Damn she really is a weapon worth seeing her fight

Love it!
Keep on updating~!

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS, first of all i love June she is so sassy and independent yes i love her. Also I'm super interested in Emmy, whats happened to her? Is she ok? Is she going to become a bigger part of the story?
I love how June is already integrated into the pack, it's different to other fics I've read and definitely refreshing. Super good job on a first chapter, I'm excited for an update!

YAY I am so excited about the rest of this, I love June already! 3