Is this story finished? If it is then it was very confusing.

You have to pace yourself. It feels rushed at times. But I am a little intrigued and I will read more of this. Good luck on your writing.

Continue please

Thank you

umm...wot?

It is sad you wont continue it,hope you find motivation to go on with it.

I have no idea what's going on in this story any more.

Hmmm... It looks like I need to apologize. Or at least explain. When I said that I 'hate' your other fick, I DIDN'T MEAN to imply that it's badly written or that the plot is bad. Nothing like that. It's just...

Hikaru no go is my 'happy place'. This story is just so innocent and sweet that whenever I'm in a bad mood, I open a HnG fanfick and everything seems better. So when I read 'Worst meeting' it was as if somebody hit me with a baseball bat. But objectively, it's not a bad story. The concept is interesting.

I'm so sorry that I made you upset. I didn't try to insult you or your story. English isn't my mother tongue either so maybe I just can't express properly what I'm thinking.

Again. Sorry ;/;/

Nice! Keep it up please!

Overall, I like your story but some of your errors are pretty bad.

Ok, this story seems nice enough. But I have a question. Are you planning on writing sth really tragic? Or graphic? Like you did in 'Worst Meeting'? I really HATE that story (cause I'm a fluff fan and besides I actually like Ogata) so I'd like to be prepared.

But 'Worst meeting' aside, 'Chance meeting' seems fine. Of course, at least if you aren't going to make crazy obsessive stalker out of Sai. I like Sai too and i don't want him to be evil.

This is extremely confusing can someone outline this for me? I'll follow if you do!

I'm so happy to see a new chapter, I DO like your story! Also, I can see progress in your writing skills even after only two chapters. I suggest however that different character dialogues and perspectives not be contained in the same paragraph due to reader confusion.

Again, thanks for updating and I look forward to more.

Awesome! Thank you for the update and wonderful chapter! It never fails to capture my interest. Mystery about Hikaru's new behavior always intrigue and I want nothing more than to unravel! I can't wait how this story will progress and when all the confusion finally clears. Keep up the great work! Good luck :)

-RazenshiaSapphire1306

I reviewed this chapter on November 9 but didn't comprehend english wasn't your native language so you did remarkably well. I think your chapter was interesting and was looking forward to more. It didn't look like you added additional content so I didn't re-read the chapter but I think you just need to have faith in your story. Personally, I think that the more chapters you provide the greater number of reviews you'll probably receive. I hope you finish it.

I'm confused