The situation couldn't be made worse!

I wish to read the full story... did gene manage to distract the spirit and somehow manage to stop that situation from getting worse...and how does it start...

Please update! I want to see where this goes.

I'm really interested to see where this story goes. Please update soon :)

Sounds amazing! Please continue! I love the tone and detail it's all so perfect!

Wow... I feel like this will turn out to be rather educational as to emotional responses. I admit, its always interested me... And this is a little like a story I wrote ages ago, but this one is darker... Anyways, I really want to see where you take it

Interesting chapter! I look forward to reading the next one

I already like this. Well, I don't mean the fact that Mai is possessed or is about to R*pe Naru, but y'know.

I think vomiting on her might've stopped possessed-Mai from continuing... Either way, interested to see where you go with this, I haven't seen the video but I'm tempted to keep it a surprise... I guess I don't need to tell you, but rape/molestation is a sensitive issue, so please be careful how you portray it? I have no issue with people writing about it, but some people think 'rape' is a funny joke or something and that sickens me... I hope that didn't sound patronising, but I realise it probably did, so sorry!