overall your story is good but can you reduce the flashback? honestly the flashback is enough to bother me even to miss it. because it's less important in my opinion.

"So look forward to that." It's been almost three years. I still have faith.

dead fic

Is this dead? I really hope not because this is an excellent start and has the potential to be the best NarutoxRWBY crossover here.

I look forward for the next update

This is extraordinarily well written. I really hope you continue this story.

To find a story of this caliber in something like fanfiction (no offense to any writers, but simply browse through some stories and you can see why if you don't already know why I said what I said) is pretty damn rare. Kudos to you.

in love with it hoping to see more in the future

good cross, any update?

Really hope you update this story. I'm really loving it so far! I can only wonder how Naruto knows Qrow, though i bet it has something to do with Kakashi. Anyway, really great start so far. I'm looking forward to your next update.

gj

Amazing story so far

So is Naruto on a personal mission to hunt Qrow, an official mission to infiltrate Vale, or both. Your not being very clear about that. Also, if Naruto has a deep grudge against Qrow, then a pairing with Ruby would be ironic, as well as dramatic, so I know who I'm rooting for. And finally, please tell me Sasuke is going to be on the team, a Sun isn't much without its Moon.

Another solid chapter. I do actually enjoy the switch between the present time and Naruto's past. I also getting more and more interested in what Naruto's true objective is.

The plot thickens. I'd say that you have Yang down pretty well. This chapter made me wonder, will Kurama be making an appearance here? Is Naruto some RWBY equivalent of a Jinchuriki? I look forward to learning the answers.