does the system really use yen? one of the most fucked up currency right next to the rupee.

that makes so very little sense

in the first story he showed his ability to move at superspeed, outrunning a group of geth asari and krogan never again have you showed this. imagne what he could do with two omiblades rushinb across the battlefield at superspeed

i found the relationship between ashley and ko'le rather hollow, unless it is love at first sight there is too little interaction between the two for it to be meaningfull.

why does ko'le has such a hard on for protheans? arnt these the monsters that experimented on him and killed his parents?

Sorry to hear about all the challenges you’re dealing with. I know I’m only reading this years later, but I hope you and your family are doing well. God bless and thank you for all your work on this magnificent series!

Loving this! You are especially good at writing heartfelt scenes, whether with Ko’le/Ashley or with the Rachni, etc — the deep affection, respect, and honor these characters show had made me tear up multiple times now.

Thank you for all your work!

It makes so much sense that the Leviathan could exert mind control to a ship orbiting its planet, and this ship just happens to have an empty vessel in the clone, so of course he would speak through her. Now I'm curious to see how the awakened clone will integrate into this story, especially with the official, "real" Shepard still unconscious. How much does the clone know? What role will she play?

It was a bold move to assassinate the Illusive Man and Henry Lawson right at the end of the ME1 timeline, but it has been fascinating to see how Ko'le has steered the Immortals organization to truly prepare for the Reapers and avoid much of the harm that Cerberus causes in ME2 and especially ME3. But in doing so, he is almost supplanting Shepard as the savior of the galaxy: he's already done many of the ME2 recruitment/loyalty missions before Shepard is even resurrected. Keeping tabs on the Alpha Relay (Arrival DLC) and assaulting the lair of the Shadow Broker now... what missions will be left for Shepard to do when she wakes?

Does Ko'le even need Shepard now that he has Prothean soldiers and a small army? Shepard is a formidable ally to be sure and of course he wants her back, but at this point, with how powerful he is, what can Shepard uniquely bring to the table that Ko'le does not already have? Will Ko'le wait for the Collectors to start abducting human colonies, or preemptively take the fight to them? Will they use the Omega-4 Relay as soon as Shepard wakes?

I'm curious to see how you'll resolve this - and will no doubt continue to enjoy every minute of reading this. Thank you so much for all your work on this!

great story

Really enjoying this so far

Another wonderful story the way we’ve OC in Canon together to create something unique is incredibly good

Wonderful chapter man he really stuck it to the council having all that inside information on their dirty little secrets can really help

Omg

I just wanted to say what makes me love your story so much is the fact that you were not just retelling the mass of fact trilogy except your character happens to be there I ran a Tonna fanfiction’s where the character doesn’t actually change anything they’re just there but you are really throwing a wrench into the universe and I love it I can’t wait to see what happens to the migrant fleet what happens to sub Mara and her daughter what happens with so many issues

I really am looking forward to seeing what happens when mother and daughter

Oh hell yeah here come the reckoning