cool story, but you could have described the s-x scene huh huh! ;)

Interesting story, the premise was good. I loved the references scattered throughout the fic and the way you introduced flashbacks. Vermouth's appearance was so random, tho!

The plot is original and well thought out, but if I have to be nitpicky, there are many consistent syntactical and grammatical mistakes which take away a bit of the magic.

Aww it's such a cute story!

EssicaJoola

what a wonderful story :D

Oh! Well, it's finished...:-( This was really an amazing story:-)... Love it... Hope to see you again with another amazing story;-)

Great story! Kudos for you! Please make a sequel or include 'that' scene. Hahahah. I love your fics. Keep it up!

Yeay, it finished!
I'll be waiting for your next story

Ok, u got me. I was one of the few silently reading it. And now since it's over, I thought I would write a review for ur hard work ;). This was a very interesting story and I liked how you put the feelings for Ran. It was realistic- girls think about those things before her first time and I think u protrayed it well. I liked how u updated fast too ;) I wait for months from other authors, but in the end it's all worth it. Thx again, hope to read ur next story

Nice one!

Great great great chapter! Loved it! Keep going...

Love it.. Love it... Love it... Waiting for the next:-)

Very happy now, i was waiting for this fic to pop in my notification around Monday or Tuesday, but it didn't come.. I thought you will not continue this, but its a relief you post the new chap, I really love your fic

Did shinichi and ran had sex? Or are they going to do it? 3

Yearning for read the next chapter...when are you going to update? Judging by the previous pattern, you usually update every week. And to be more precise, in every 5-6 days...Have been waiting since Dec 21, plzzzz update...

Ok.. Yearning for more chapters..