Well that was wild from start to finish. Brilliant twists and storybuiliding. Thanks for writing this.

great story

I loved every bit of this and again, am so glad you added to that one shot. The twists and turns and add ins made it spectacular. I am sad about Jasper though. Couldn’t you have killed Edward instead? ;-)

I am an emotional wreck right now. I meant to go to bed earlier but now it’s 4:30 in the morning and I’m determined to finish. Omg the rollercoaster! And I was right! He heals people, brings them back from the dead! And Edward can fuck off, he’s the one that’s selfish. He never wanted to change her to begin with and now when she isn’t his and he’s faced with the reality of how he wanted her to live her life he wants her changed? Fuck off Eddie boy!

Holy damn!

I knew it! Fucking Monica! She was the only one with that inside info. Two years with the pack. And I think Ace it’s brought his brothers back. He doesn’t just heal, he brings the dead back to life. Zane swore Quil was dead, swore they all were. I believe him. And Quil’s last word was Ace. He knew who saved him. I’m not worried about them. They’re gonna be fine. They have to be. I can’t have them due on top of Jasper, I just can’t. And I sobbed like a loon over Jasper and how badly Quil was hurt. And Jake is right, wouldn’t have mattered who was on recon, Aro would have had Jasper taken out. He’s the only Cullen that can truly fight. The warrior. I can’t wait to watch Monica and Aro die. I was also wrong about the fog. I can’t believe Aro would allow them to use a poison gas that might kill Bella and Ace too. That was stupid.

I think Monica was working for Aro all along. I also think Ace isn’t just human and wolf, I think he’s part vampire too. No bleeding, he clearly has several gifts—not just the shield—and he’s advanced for his age. Just like Renesmee was. He healed Willow and I think the vamp heightens his senses. I’m also afraid he’s just phased. Alec and Jane, the way you described that it’s their gifts. Pain first, then the sensory deprivation fog. The only way Aro would have known she’d be vulnerable is Monica and that camera crew coming in. I’m betting that was set up by him. God I hope they get to her soon because she and her babies and son are in danger. I also have a feeling she’s going to have a protector she didn’t expect in Ace.

The ridiculous six, Taylor is in that and yeah I noticed the funny. And it was. I laughed good. Everything is too good. There’s no way it’s going to last and I have a bad feeling that the beginning is going to be Monica. I wonder if she’d make a good mate for Edward? They never did find out who that vamp in her car was either.

Good for her. I have a feeling Bella’s uneasiness is over something else. I also have a feeling their wedding is not going to go according to plan because that would be too easy.

Baby boom, right after Bella is fully marked? Coincidence? I hope she doesn’t lose this baby. Please don’t let it happen. Why in the hell did Kaleigh come there? Was it just because she’s on drugs and not thinking clearly? Nope, not happy to see her, she can go away. And I’m team Claire but once she’s older. It’s clear that Quil and Claire feel more for one another than they think and Monica is being super bitchy. I liked her in the beginning but damn. I don’t think they should have told her the secret. I know Barry and Bella care about her but I’m not sure she’ll keep it.

Damn Monica, act the diva much? Lmao. For someone not hanging with him or wanting to be round him, Claire sure got all jealous and shit. Can’t be a Denali, they’d recognize those scents since Seth met them at Bella and Edward’s wedding and they’d share the scent through the pack mind. Charlotte wouldn’t find some rando human like that, she and Peter would just show up and call out “honey, we’re home”. Lol. I can only conclude it’s Jane. She’s the only one they’d entrust with a semi-solo mission like that because her gift would mostly protect her and she looks like a sweet innocent kid except for the eyes. They don’t let the wives out, so it couldn’t be Athenadora.

Shit, that thing has been inside him while the pack have been strategizing, training, and while he and Bella say at a table and talked about her being a shield and Edward’s little hearing her moment and his revelation that he has a theory regarding Ace and the boy being special. If it’s capable of listening in on shit, Rose is right. They’re doomed. And venom is deadly to wolves but the illustrated guide says they usually survive a bite unless they’re injured in other ways too. He wasn’t, which makes me wonder if that’s why the venom hadn’t affected him in any way yet. I wonder if Aro anticipated Carlisle being able to get that thing out of Jake.

Edward was so awkward with Ace. Lmao. Anywho, I wonder what that was all about. He was annoyingly vague and I don’t trust Edward in most fics where he’s not the main male. You never know with him. As for Jake, hopefully they’ll figure his leg out soon but the alpha unable to perform at peak is not a good thing, at all. Plus, they need to call in Eleazar possibly. If anyone can help her figure out her shield it’s him. Also, they already know of a shield, Renata. Why does it seem like Bella has no clue about her? Shields exist but they’re all acting as if they don’t. Perhaps none have ever been as powerful as Bella as to work while human but they’re still out there.

Jake’s leg worries me, but I always new Ace was special. Aro senses it too, or he wouldn’t be so interested. Plus there’s that little tidbit about her bite from James disappearing. Idgaf about Kaleigh. Only thing I need to see is that she’s signed the divorce papers and Jake is finally free. Quil and Monica? Hmmmm. And no relationship should be perfect. It’s healthy to disagree, even fight, because bottling it up leads to resentment and failed marriages in my opinion. Just, if you’re always fighting and you say mean things to intentionally hurt the other, that isn’t healthy.

When did Quil and Paul become the ones that make the most sense? Lmao. Good thing they gave him a kick in the ass. Now it’s Bella's turn. As for Quil, it’s ok if his feelings change. It’s clear he isn’t feeling sexually toward her, or any type of way that would make me go “ewww you perv”. Things are just changing. I think even without the new phasing it would. As for Zane, that little shit needs to stop. He’s new, he doesn’t get it, he doesn’t get to make opinions about things he knows nothing about and that happened a long time ago. He’s just mad that he may not get to be with Claire or that he may imprint himself. Frankly, they’re both too young to be having anything that requires being safe or thinking of permanence. She’s just 13, and he’s just 14. They’re not ready. (And just an FYI which is probably tmi but I was 15 when I first had sex so I know just how not ready those two are).