this was amazing! definitely one of the best StEx fanfictions I've ever read :D

Really nice ending. Was kind of hoping for a kiss though. Still really really good. So since this one is done are ya gonna do another chapter?

This was such a good ending to such a great fic! I'm really sad the journey is over as I have enjoyed reading every single chapter but I guess all good things must come to an end! I do hope you have another StEx fic up your sleeve though as I do love your writing.

Thank you for the shout out too. -

OMG you updated! Nice ending!

Update already! The suspense is killing me. But hey if ya need to take time to make it good take your time. but seriously the suspense is killing me

So when are rusty and pearl gonna make up? Please let Pearl take him back. Also nice chapter. Totally what those witches deserve

Uh oh, do I sense Cassie has one more foul trick up her sleeve?

But wow, you really ramped up the tension in these latest installments! Good for Pearl for sticking up for herself and showing those two evil coaches even they can't mess with the yard princess! Also, I loved how you portrayed Electra at the end of this chapter; I could actually visualise his expressions and everything!

Also, I'm amazed that Buffy hasn't self-combust yet the amount of times she's got so wound up! Are you sure you don't want to let her loose on those two catty sisters?! xD

Nice turn of events. So what that witch Cassie deserves!

Another brilliant chapter! I really like how you've shown Poppa trying to be fair and mature about the whole situation but giving Rusty a little telling-off too and having him contrast with Ashley who clearly has no patience when it comes to Rusty (and who can blame her?) Also, I love how you've got the whole girl power thing going on with Pearl! I'm totally rooting for her!

Keep up the good work. I'm excitedly waiting for the next installment!

No one is going to die right? I mean if you kill someone have it be like Cassie.

Well, I wasn’t expecting that! I’m now totally worrying about what happens in this second heat and then the final!

Also, Greaseball isn’t even one of my favourite characters and i’m fretting about him too!

Great work as always - I can’t wait to read what happens next!

Ahh, what a cliffhanger! Loved how you really built up the tension here! Can't wait for you to post the next chapter although, as you have said in your notes, I am also getting sad that we are getting close to the end!

I'm really enjoying reading your work. Your characterisation is brilliant and the humour is so fitting and fun. I have found myself laughing to myself a few times at some of the lines you've been giving Buffy and Ashley!

These two latest chapters have served as a great build-up to the coming race and I'm eagerly waiting for your next installment!

This is great and so interesting! Keep it up!

["Maybe," Sofia mused, "though I kinda already had an idea for my partner." She rolled her foot back and forth, a small blush forming on her cheeks.

"Ooh, maybe you'll get him before the championship in a month? I think you'll have enough time by then," Pearl encouraged her. "You won't know unless you try and ask them! I wish I'd gone with my first choice last year, but I'm glad I get to this year… Right, Rusty?" She turned to her engine, finding that he looked a little more than green in the face instead of excited for their first championship together.]

So much love for that whole section there. There's a bit of tension in here too :D

Rusty is a bit clueless, isn't he? I guess he's got a lot of growing up to do yet.