Please continue the story it is a wonderful story

I take it Wisp has similar Lyrium markings to Fenris? I wonder what would happen if someone used Red Lyrium instead of Blue for those tattoos? Or a mixture to get Purple Lyrium?

please update. this story is awesome!

This was a great chapter.
Please keep up the great work.

splendid, interesting character development

This is an awesome story can't wait for chapter 4

i'm enjoying this story immensely so far and look forward to where you take the plot from here. i'm especially looking forward to coryphyus's introduction

i absolutely love how menma is portrayed and the way he acts in this story. nice background for him and his crew so far. love the interactions between menma and the dragon age characters

Not really sure what someone might of thought of as conflicting or bad in this chapter but it was enjoyable. Loved the flying pirate ship and enjoyed the uzumaki's hanging ten as captains. Gotta love Menma's choices in women though. Always gets the real fun loving possessive but super loyal types. Good times.

Ah so true. In any of the Dragon Age games I just wanted to interrupt and slap people so often. Jeez. Fun story time though. Menma gets all the bitches in this one. Its already obvious and I can't help but cheer him on.

Oh the second? Interesting.

Good story, big fan of pirates, can't wait to see where this story goes.

so what kind of flight style are they using?

Warcraft flight.

Dragon Commander flight.

or

Magic based flight.

I love this story . Hay can you do menma GTA V

nice story . can you make a menma assassin's creed