ooh yeah, that was ... fucking hot. and i also love the way her thoughts run at the end, silently giving "real" answers to Lyle's question. so lovely.

the first time the timeline switched I got confused but then I got into the rhytm and it was amusing and emotional and just wonderful

OHMY, indeed such audacity concerning tongues. I do like the new and more confident Jarod, bringing out a new side of Miss Parker.

"Well, I guess it *would* depend on the identity of the captive. I haven't murdered or defenestrated any members of his immediate family."

*cackles* Oh so true..

"Rest now," he whispered. "You'll need it."

Uh huh. Considering he's read Kama Sutra, I'd say so, yes...

I haven't grinned like this in a long time, love this story :D

Oh...my... O.O *goes up in flames [no pun intended]*

Oh my gosh! This was great! WOW!

Good Lord... dirty & hott. haha. Jarod didn't seem himself though in the beginning but I guess he just wanted her REAL bad that he knew no boundaries. haha. Good Job.

HOLY COW HOW AWESOME!

everything you write is wonderful, and this was no exception

OOh. I like this one. Lol. It's funny how she talked around them.

wow.

I can tell have I been missing out on quite a bit with not keeping up with your writing! Now I do hope, for your sake, that you’ll be posting all your fics up here that have been posted not only on PretendFic but also Nic’s Pretender Fan Fiction Archive… I need to catch up and I think everyone here who is reading your stuff would like to read them!

Miss Parker.

Ah, MP is SUCH a Pretender! Sometimes we forget she was a red file too! LOL

This story was both excellently written, and well thought out when it comes to characterization. I can just SEE Jarod kidnapping Miss Parker after the events of IOTH. but not for the usual reasons. ;)

I want to thank you for writing such a great Pretender fic (especially a Jarod/Miss Parker), you don't know how frustrated I get sometimes trying to find GOOD Pretender fan fiction. It's a dying breed. Anyway, I'd love it if you wrote more and I'll definitely be checking in often to see if you have.

Just. excellent :D

Great story. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Very, very yummy. I could see Jarod pulling something like this on Ms. Parker. A lovey litte fic.