Reviews for Lila Lokisdottir
Serenity Natsuki chapter 9 . 8/23
Plz update
Crazy Girl Writer chapter 9 . 7/22
I really do like your story. Its engaging and fun.

I understand how you might have lost inspiration or knowing how to go forward. You've kinda lost all the obstacles and antagonists that need to be overcome in the harry Potter world and haven't introduced any from the marvel world. With Voldemort gone and dumbledore gone the only semi obstacle is the stupidity of the English magical society but you've kinda already set up that they are a weak nuisance. Maybe a few small bits could be turned out from the English Wizarding community getting an overhaul but not really at this point. As for the marvel world since you haven't really set them up with any antagonist and made it a bit idealistic so far with none of the thanos story line or evil loki story line or guardians of the galaxy story line etc in their to show the bad you also don't have antagonists. Personally I would say if you are looking to continue this story look to antagonists from the marvel world. Put together a timeline or story line of plots you liked from the movies and how you would have liked them to go and how having a good loki and a lila lokisdottir in the mix would change them.

I think your story is great please take anything I've written in the spirit I wrote it which was to hopefully give a little advice, Insight and maybe inspiration. Good luck in future writings!
WarlockWonderLand chapter 1 . 2/7
not bad, not bad, i quite like this idea.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 9 . 10/8/2019
I wouldn't mind Seeing Amelia Moving To America with Susan. And Transferring The Bones family Vaults to America and any other Family Branch Vaults with them and Putting all of their Family Properties in Lockdown.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 4 . 10/8/2019
Dumbledore is a threat to everyone, not just Lila And the same goes for Voldemort. Just locking them up isn't good enough. They could easily escape.

I would arrange to send those twos spirits to Hela and Hade's so that they can punish those two even more once they are Dead.
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 9 . 5/6/2019
I am sorry you felt necessary to discontinue this story. It has been very enjoyable and I'll be sorry to see you go. I hope to look forward to your other stories.

Enjoy life, and never be sorry you did.
briana.schmidt1 chapter 9 . 4/14/2019
Fudge attempts to send a 'polite' letter to Lila that as a British citizen she is obligated to live in Britain sometime. As well as a not so thinly veiled threat that loki may have to return for a trial regarding the toad lady. Then loki decides to go to the daily prophet and give Rita skiteer her start as a gossip reporter by decimating the minister and how much of a bad job he's doing. I have other ideas. And I understand what it's like to lose inspiration for you stories. But most fem!harry stories get annoying. But you actually keep it amazing and fresh. Please do not take down the story. It took me two years to get back into writing for my story. It may take longer. But you would be doing the world a great disservice by taking the story down. Don't feel that you have to leave it up, but it doesn't really cost you to leave it up and it really is an amazing story. Be proud of what you do have up even if no one else will. Because there will be those special few who enjoy what you write. I know I did. So stiff upper lip and carry on pet.
Signed,
A fan
TinyFox2 chapter 5 . 4/6/2019
Oh...I wanted to hear about it... :(
breannapierson1990 chapter 9 . 4/4/2019
Well you could always put the story up for adoption or keep it up until your muse returns and you get inspired once more.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/4/2019
Know me as guardianranger. Could I continue your story please
Moonlesscat chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
Don't take it down.
Take your time. The best stories are the ones that start off like this. Inspiration happens when you least expect it.
binkleys23 chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
keep it going. I would like to see what happens next. update more soon if u can
ej-83 chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
awww shucks..i love reading this story..oh well..maybe u can put it up for adoption?
ThePhoenixandtheDragon chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
Sad to see this story go on hiatus but I understand losing your muse for a story. I hope you will return to this amazing storyline in the future.
Pikachu79 chapter 9 . 4/3/2019
That is too bad as I enjoyed this story but you can't force the muses. Good luck with your other stories.
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