Apologies if this is out of place. I thought there were two things you may want to reconsider in this story.

The line: Kushina smirked. "I know Ranma, you're much too shy and repressed. If you actually watched Akane change, you would've passed out from blood loss. Still, it's not right."
-I expect that is a typo and it was meant to be, "I know, Ryouga. You're much..."

Also, the line: Ryouga started to get angry. "Ranma, you promised!"
-I had been under the impression that Ryouga didn't know Ranma's promise to not reveal the curse.

This was as always a great and fun fic. And it's, sadly, the best Ranma is Kushina fic ever. I say sadly because it's the best mainly because it the only completed fic of this type, so it wins by default. I'm not saying that it's not good, because it is, but when you have no other competition… well anyways, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.

I doesn't really integrate two fandoms well. It's not a horrible read, but feels a bit pointless since there's not much of an actual story there other than "ranma tells everyone off" in Nerima part and "Kushina kicks ass" in Naruto part.

Nice concept and ok story. The ending is too abrupt for me, and could do with a bit more detail.

Hmmm, interesting story. I think that it was rushed some, but still a good read. I believe that this story could be made longer. Just have Naruto doing the fighting since his mother is the Hokage, still it was a good read. I look forward to reading your other stories.

So in the end Ukyo, Nodoka, Shampoo and Konatsu were paid less than lip service. No hilights nor stories for them just dead. Not even a mentioned legacy.

I do like what you have But its not Naruto's story, its not really a Ranma story. Even for a Ranma seasoning this needs a bit more. This is Kushina's story's clifnotes. A bare bones minimum telling that might help you pass a test but doesn't let any other character exist outside of direct influence as part of Kushina's life.

Please consider a revision/remake that fills in some blanks and doesn't forget Konoha is a living character too. The Clans the shops the civilians they all matter and there is an entire untold story for any leader leaving them out.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

You wanted to stop here? Before seing any results of the changes all caused in this. There are open lose ends for what haNerima with all these people gone. With Shampoo and Ranma not even in the same world Cologne might not have to leave. What becomes of the masubetsukakutryu on earth?

And that doesn't hint at the life the Uzumaki clan has ahead of them.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Ouch seriously missing needed parts about how things went The house might have been under a seal but there is a massive blank for how Konoha took the new residents and how they got along in this time. They had a shadow clone, potential ones to replace it could teleport back as needed, but That still leaves shopping oany other ventures outside the compound.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Ended in an anticlimax. Sure the villain was weakened but this just seemed so author fiat in the end. Why not have Manda attack then reverse Summon them so they can escape and not seem like a bunch of padding.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Again I see a character in name only. Shizune, would have had some reaction and interaction in here.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

You have forgotten the Ranma/Nerima part of this. You still have 4 people that have not even been properly introduced to this world nor even to Konoha. With days passing you still need to show their story too. Otherwise bringing them was pointless.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

You even have a great outline for a spinoff here. Just flesh out the characters and let the world grow showing the events and more. Let the tale of the years show how and why things went the way they did.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

Seeing that you started off saying you wanted to do a more complete story, maybe a spinoff of this would be a good idea.

Write the story of what happens in the 20 years. How Ranma became Kushina Uzumaki and how her life went. Maybe even make it clear how she ended up a fox container in the first place. Or the more difficult task of a believable romance without breaking character to get it to work.

Daniel Thomas Stack
AKA Spokavriel at yahoo.

not a good story you took naruto great moment and gave them to Ranma

Best Kushina/Ranma fanfic ever!