I love the story if you can please finish it

I am 100% positive the author forgot this story even existed seeing as for the past 2 years he's been doing mha stories instead but oh well it was a nice story while it lasted and I wish the author well but imma have to unsubscribe seeing as this is the only story of his I read considering I'm not a mina deku fan. so gl dude

Well, this fic has been totally freaking awesome! It’s too bad that it probably won’t be finished tho. If you do end up finishing it, good for you for hanging in there. If not, that’s ok, but just disappointing for everyone who’s been waiting. Either way, good luck on your future endeavors!

QuirkQuartz I trusted you why did you not keep your promise to finish the story why?! *cries in the corner feeling betrayed*

Man, binged this in 2 days, now I gotta wait. I do the sad now. Seriously though love this story. Also, there is a habit in your writing I noticed. You put in "deFIANTly" which means rebelliously, instead of "deFINITEly", which, as you obviously know, means surely. Wanted to point that out. Really though, great story! The other day, I read One Day Off, loved that too.

I am reading this at the 24 of january 2018. Can u make more i love this so much?!

This is one of the best stories I have read! Please keep writing, you're doing an amaaaaaazing job!

A review from a new guy, does anyone even read that? Does the writer even read this? I hope so, because I have a few things to say...

Well, actually a lot of things. First the minor advices I will always intend to give:
1. Reread, something that can never be pressed enough. Reread to find type-mistakes, because these can sometimes rip a story apart.
2. Don't add to many details. I love those that explain things in reasonable detail so you can see the scene before you, but don't go down to the atom, please.
3. Last but not least, listen to the reviews, comments and mayby take a few ideas along. You never know when someone has an idea that could actually become something.

Now my own thoughts:
BEST STORY IN EVER! I might not seem to it, but I've got a few years of analyzing stories behind me. I've read some fanfictions on amourshipping before, but these just match up with the actual show so well! I might find a few details here and there that can be touched up on, but for the rest: INCREDIBLE!

I can't agree any more with the others: Keep on writing on this story! I love amourshipping, and it only gets more support every day. I have a simple example to share with you. If you don't want to, then ignore it, if you're interested, take a glance! I strongly believe in this and if we get more support then we can show the world that the thoughts fans have are important to the running of a show!
It's a simple link, leading to a petition. It's something I already contributed to, and like to see more.
Here's the link (for those interested of course) p/pokemon-bring-serena-to-the-alola-region-with-ash/

If you know anything else about this or something similar, then please do tell me! I'm a HUGE amourshipping fan and I intend to help get this happening.

Signing of, LarsEversea143
Peace! "-"

Please please please add a new chapter!

This story is so interesting, keep up the good work

You are an awesome writer!

I a man loving this fanfic

Is this an follow-up to "looks don't matter and "before you go"?

Lovitlovitlovit I just lovit

this chapter was actually off character for ash and also i mean why would they be spending time on a date when both are worried to death on when synthcorp would strike again

This is getting good...