So...this story has been abandon hasn't it? What a shame. What makes it even more disappointing is that you didn't leave an author's note for those of us that stuck around and waited if you were gonna put this story on hiatus or that you were leaving.

What a waste. :(

When is the next chapter? It's been nearly two years!

When is this story going to get updated?

I want chapter 19

the power was too much for his young body to handle.
so he switched souls and everything was fine. what the soul had to do with the body is something only you know

wow how you can fuck up a story in just one fight.
you have soul synchronized. yes this is a term do you think gohan is the only onr with 3 souls? ofc not it happens all the time. fucking bullshit to make the story canon. yeah sure gohan killed nappa the point is nappa still died an gohan is unable to fight.

you trying to keep gohan weak just wont work unless you force it, which you do. anyone with future knowledge on dbz will be op

if it is true that by dissagreeing with his counterparts his power drops i would kill them no question.
cant hah that why they have this ultimate hack called dragonballs

the whole this needs to happen and higher powers stopping them is just bullshit. if there is such a thing as faith majunior and mystic should hsve stayed dead

it takes a lot to do a lot.
we'll have a talk later about what he was talking about.

as a rule you alwase try to avoid using 2 words in the same sentence.

to do so much takes a lot of energy.
we'll have to discuss what he talked about later

im a little dissapointed they didnt take advantage of the spacepods to create grav chambers sooner

why do ppl alwase think when using weighted clothes their power lvl is lower. to keep up with the strain you need to make it higher

I love these types of stories I would not mind Gohan getting a harem though

Gohan with Zangya maybe 18 and Videl Krillin can go with maron

GohanxVidelxZanguya

ChikuxErasa[wish for baby with both dna]

*sigh* The conversation with 3 year old Gohan is beyond ridiculous.. Honestly you should get rid of that, in fact get rid of most of chapter one and start the story years after the fusion with some flashbacks explaining what happened but without ridiculous ROBs or 3years old kids capable of words bugger than 4 letters.

Man i really love the is my first time that i feel truly immersed in a story and trust me, I'm a total bookworm, you really know how to draw in the attention of the reader.