I hope you don't take this to offense, but this chapter has a lot of typos in it. The story is really good, but kinda confusing in the end. It is good, though.

that was intense. nice! :D

here we go...

a good night sleep before they go into action again.

poor Rose. can't imagine how a child would feel under such circumstances. hell, i can't imagine how i would feel at this point. scary shit, the apocalypse. :(

that was heartbreaking. :(

ever wondered what happened to the Morales family?

Rose should see the reality of the situation. it sucks that kids in the apocalypse has to see these things but it's just the way it is.

that certainly lessened their number. :(

if only it was Merle who made it to the quarry. :(

i am feeling bad for Rose. they shouldn't have left her. she looks so scared.

if i were Eli, i'd make Rick explain to rose what happened. Eli doesn't deserve that burden. shit just happens in the apocalypse.

I don't mean to sound rude, but your grammar is bad.

this is a very interesting twist. would love to read more. :)

The song you're talking about, Wake Me Up by who?