I just finished it and I absolutely LOVED it. I would have been pissed if they had sold the burrow though, so I'm glad they ended up living there and naming their son after Arthur. It was so sweet. And I loved all of the Arthur/Molly scenes spread throughout the story, but I'm not entirely sure why they were there because it didn't seem like flashbacks or like it tied in with the story too much (the rocking chair and baby blanket were probably the only things I noticed explained some things).

ok. so I'm reviewing a lot today/night, but I'm reading this story almost non-stop. And now I am crying. That patronus hit me harder than what happened at the end of chapter 10. Congratulations; you have written one of the very few fanfics that has ever made me cry

"Albums walked into the kitchen. The plates were still out, his own dinner still mostly untouched. Albus sighed, ignoring it and making his way into the living room. The television was still going, the same little scene with the menu playing over and over from the last movie.I DON'T WANT TO KEEP READING, because I just had to look ahead at the chapter titles earlier. Ugh

...I think I know why you said 8 instead of 7 now.

Loving this fic. It's probably the first next gen fix I've read too. But in chapter 2, Arthur says he had 8 kids; they only had 7, unless that was from one of your other stories

Of the next gen series you've done, this is by far my favorite. I can come back to it and cry buckets of tears time and time again. I just love it.

3 Love this fanfic! You have a great writing style- hope to read more of your stuff soon!

You absolutely have a thing for introducing undramatically heavy drama... it's a gift

Wow... powerful chapter. Beautifully written, all in the subtlety... brilliant.

My heart :) well done - Lissie

My cousins name is Emily Davis!

a good chapter can't wait to read more.

Very emotional chapter. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one xx

Overall I just freaking love this story. My love for daddy!Albus is unparalleled by anything else in the universe I think haha, and them as a family are so cute. When he made her turn around with Arthur and he had all those bags and kissed her...ugh, so cute. And I LOVE how you aligned Molly/Arthur with kids to something similar with Emily and Albus. They're just so sweet together and this whole story has incredible character development and growth and the way it was a push and pull right at the end...I love this :D

Words cannot describe the love I have for this chapter. Let alone, I haven't even complimented the story as a whole yet. First off, Emily is a bit of a bitch and Albus is a bit of a know it all at the beginning and that is so OK because they're amazing people like overall and they bring out the best in each other throughout their relationship. My favorite thing about this though is that beautiful talk they have with each other though, about Albus and how handsome he is and his insecurity with teasing, and THEN OMG THE PARALLELS between Molly/Arthur and Albus/Emily and THEN THOSE BRILLIANT FLASHBACKS so we can see Molly and Arthur develop alongside Albus and Emily and that scene at the end literally broke my heart. Like I think I heard it.