Scary! The Lord, (former one in the manga), is frickin' terrifying! Honestly, it's no wonder he and Frankenstein butt heads... or, rather, Frankenstein has complicated thoughts towards him. And Raizel! He so innocent and pure and gentle and beautiful... and so sweet too! I loved Frankenstein teasing Raizel, but upholding his honor and being careful not to be too outrageous! This was great fun to read! I think I've mentioned that to all of the fics of yours I've commented on. And, I really, truly think you have a fantastic gift! I'm happy after reading this fic!

You know, I don't think I've ever read a straight romance from you. This is so sweet, so very very sweet. Nice.

Oh, you updated this one! Nice.

LOL Wedding?

Oh my gosh, Rai's "Wait, he's attracted to me?" reaction to Frankenstein's blatant fantasizing is adorable. And Frankenstein falling in love instead of just attraction, and the Lord being an overprotective idiot, and everything about this fic is gorgeous.

"If they were reading his mind, they wouldn't have fallen for 'look behind you'"- pure literature.
"he looked too young to be subjected to anything harsh, even in fantasy"-AHAHA

Omg thanks for acknowledging the height difference Franken is totally taller XD
Wow. wow, Ok, this is beautiful. I love. I really liked how hard Franken was trying to convince himself that these were 'tests,' they might have actually been at first, but who are we kidding? The way that Franken asks consent to touch Rai was so sincere-and also, Rai's consent.
"Your duty." Emphasising the notion of duty in this really shows how important it is for the both of them. (And how compatible they are with each other tbh.) They both want to, but can't. (Until they do.)

And also, the moment where Rai is keeping himself from stepping towards Franken, and vice versa for Franken- that was really intense. You clearly showed how desperate, how needing they were- it was an overwhelming moment where both were verging on losing control and just 'going for it.' And then- all of this comes to a head when Rai goes 'duty.' Heavy moment.

The great thing about this one is that interesting exposition- who the Noblesse is, what Franken's supposed role is etc, and his own thoughts etc- is weaved in nicely with what is going on in the scene. The action is Rai and Franken flirting it up, and it's glorious.

Ah Previous Lord, never change.

Where have you been all my life

... This is just brilliant, perfect..

Yes, yes, yes, yes, annddd MORE YES. THIS IS THE TYPE OF CONTENT I LIVE FOR FOR NOBLESSE. Exquisite job and plot Laryna, you captured it all perfectly and kept the bit of comedy in this story here and there fresh. I would love it if there was more, but similarly, I don't need more.
This is a quality work of art imo. Just... You did great, this fic justifies as much as it mystifies. Happy writings!

Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Lovelovelovelove! I can't wait to see how this would affect future interactions!