This fic should be classified as Naruto Mortal Kombat, rather than just Naruto. I'm sure I don't need to explain *why,* with all the crossover elements in this? As well as MK characters making appearances? This isn't a Naruto fic, but a Naruto Mortal Kombat fic.

..i fucking hate the idea of a Fem!Kyuubi, like wtf!? WHO CAME UP WITH THAT FUCKING HORSESHIT?! It's such full of fucking shit! The Kyuubi, is not female, nor is it male, NOR DOES IT HAVE A FUCKING, GOD DAMNED HUMAN FORM! LIKE, JESUS MOTHER FUCKING CHRIST! But..I suppose I can *tolerate* it so long as *it* isn't in the fucking harem. Like, seriously, who even came up with that idea!? Fem!Kyuubi, oh hey, always full of lust and sexy human form over here and open to relationship with a child! Male/Genderless!Kyuubi, big fucking bad guy fox over here with no human form! Like, for fuck sakes, this God damned fandom!

..other than *that,* it's a good story so far. I just hope Naruto doesn't have girls falling left and right for him, cuz this story seems like it can definitely fit as a solely NaruHaku fic, rather than a harem.

Hey sorry to here about the all the flames you received i would like to say I actually like the story so far. so when you feel ready and passionate again can't wait to read more the latest mk 11 story expansion might give you ideas just a suggestion to help you out.

all I have to to say after read the first chapter is ... DDDDUUUUUUUUUDDDDDEEE. can't wait to read the rest of it ... oh boy back to story

...what? The hokage "understands that some shinobi need that time off"? So in other words any shinobi can just up and leave their village during a mission with no questions asked, because they wanna go fuck off on some self discovery journey? In what military has going AWOL been treated as "well, he really did seem stressed lately, let's let him be".

The Hinata reincarnation was so forced. I will just keep reading just because I do like the story, but Hinata scene was cringy as hell.

i thought it was Naruto x Mortal Kombat. but holy shit that Killer Instinct cameo is great as hell

Hey there, I've been following your writing for a while and I think it's a shame that your reviews for this story are negative, it's amazing and well written.
I hope you get the passion back for it, because I would love to see where it goes from here.

wait so is the former wife of scorpion hitomi or kana im very confused

Its alright, I understand, I can wait for as long as possible! I loved reading what you have so far, and if we have to wait for a while, Ill just read your other stuff

I'm not fully up to date with this fic but your creativity and ability in merging of characters that highly contrast them selves is quite astonishing. The other thing I'm enjoying is how you transition with the name of the place and what character exactly are we following but the way you bold the speach for certain characters shows the reader that yes this character is powerful and no you don't want to mess with them. The only criticism I can really give is that sometimes your wording is dodgey but I do get what you mean and doesn't ruin the experience personnaly other then that I think you are a very talented writer and can't wait to catch up on the rest of your fic and for you to finish them.

Scorpion is the best

Just started reading this story and right now it’s a 10/10 i hope you’ll be able to finish it completly

Please continue this fanfiction when you can, this is one of the best Naruto fanfictions that I read, easily in my top 10. I always look forward to reading this. You have my support and gratitude.

can you replace the come here to GET OVER HERE it would sound like scorpion that way sorry small suggestion ignore it