Reviews for Naruto Uzumaki: Chonicles Of The Kyūbi Jinchūriki
inuyasha16451 chapter 3 . 12/9/2017
Omg. That was awesome. Please come back and update this soon.
kyuubi bunshin15 chapter 2 . 1/23/2017
You sir need to learn how to maths. If all the physical changes (hair,eyes, whisker marks, etc) count as one leaves 8, which up to this point your right, then you add 5 elements. 8 minus 5 is 3 not 2. Then you gave him a kekkei and more flexibility. That's only 8 total so if kurama was supposed to give him 9 things then your missing one
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 3 . 6/25/2016
Hahahaha oh that's golden. Please continue this, at the rate it's going it has good plot and great ideas for the future. I can't wait to see what happen. Also I would be sorely tempted to snap the Uchiha-Teme wrist if he put a knife to my throat and drew blood. Fucking prick.
Dante3142 chapter 3 . 5/4/2016
Well that is one hell of a way to end a story. Is there a plan to continue or is this dead?
flame55 chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
This is great
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
"Hard lucks teme." I think you meant, "Tough luck teme."
"...give him niem abilities.. - "give him nine abilities"
"...five and then one again is seven by your old me it was eight..." - "five and then one again is seven but you told me it was eight..."
There are a few other grammatical errors but this was just a quick read through. I enjoyed it so far.
HellaDope chapter 3 . 11/24/2015
Damn would been cool if he got wood release (maybe too cliche?) Or maybe like nature chakra idk.. kinda just rambling ..I've haven't a read an explosion release naruto yet can't wait for updates :D
thor94 chapter 2 . 11/24/2015
why naruto affinities will take five slots? (every people born with at least one element, so naruto obtain all afinities should take 3 or 4 slots) and i think two slot for simple face plastic surgery and little more fleibility is a kind of waste.
oghren chapter 1 . 11/24/2015
Interesting story idea, though grammar could use some work. Still keep on trying and update soon.
bankai777 chapter 3 . 11/23/2015
Will Naruto learn the Rasenringu.
Allhailthesith chapter 2 . 11/23/2015
you missed one. you said his appearance changes took one and that he had 8 left then you used 5 for each element but instead of 3 you said there were only 2 left, you missed one. ps: only 4 are needed for elements naruto already has one. pss: your choices suck(not to flame but flexibility? chakra natures?(you dont need water nature to use water jutsu or fire nature to use fire jutsu, natures just make it easier and you can train yourself to have natures. its a huge waste to give up 5/4 kekkei genkai for something thats pretty much useless) and last but not least JUST GIVE HIM RINNEGAN it gives him the rinnegan and all its powers and all elements so instead of wasting 4 or 5 for all elements use one and get all elements and godlike rinnegan.
Captain Leska 1997 chapter 2 . 11/22/2015
Love the story can't wait till next chapter
JJP123 chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
so what ability's will Naruto get?
KukanKing chapter 1 . 11/22/2015
wait your gonna give naruto nine abilities ain't that bit much like won't he be way OP/GODLIKE