Please make another chapter. This is so good. I absolutely positively love it. Your a great writer and please don't ever stop. I'm starting to sound like a parent, so I'm gonna stop here. Just please write more.

This was really good I wish there was more to it. It was extremely well written, you did a great job on their characteristics.

*CRIES* Bruce! Ahhhhgggg! This is so cute! But the end...! Will you keep going?! Please!?

ok i loved this at the beginning, then you had to go and shove all my missing organs back in and rip them out again. how very rude of you to do in such an amazING MANNER I MEAN WHO DOES THAT D,: ARRRRG THIS IS SO CUTE AND THE END AND OSIHFOALNSSD IM SAD NOW BUT ALSO SO HAPPY AND IM JUST GONNA STOP NOW

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I thought this was a great story :)

Really loved it! Get little pieces of before AoU and how they got started, and during AoU.

I can dig it, haha.