This is really good and you capture their voices perfectly :-)

Awww, cute one shot.

Hello!

Everyone that writes something about The Impossible Planet / The Satan Pit has my instant love (and it's eternal) because those are my favourite episodes ever. Really. Ever. (Well, ask me again in ten years). So... I love how Rose and The Doctor talks about mortages and living normal lifes. In the episode, when the do it... oh my... the Doctor's face and Roses... Well, back to the point: the idea of getting a ship actually is really good. No ship is the TARDIS but well, as long as their I moving.

And the FEELS. I get impression that the both know but they aren't really sure what is it in the first place. Did you know that in spanish we have TWO ways of saying "I love you" (yeah, I know a missed the point, I swear this have something to do in the review). One of the ways is a more casual one (Te quiero, like if you're saying "I like very very very much") the kind of thing you said to friends, family, your boyfriend when you start dating... and the other one... (Te amo) WELL, its the kind of thing that exists between the Doctor and Rose, much more deep. I always think that is what their "I love you" means. And you get it really well. ;)

Good story.

Nea Poulain.

Oh, hello!

I'm back! And reviewing, no less. Who'd have thought.
This is a lovely story. I really like it, the careful affection and intimacy of it all, romantic, but still platonic (I love that). Sharing almost without saying, just the two of them, understanding each other and even TALKING about some important stuff. That's, pheww, a lot for them. I always love to read stories when they share stuff, because when you watch the show, you suspect that the sharing happens on some level, some time, but we don't usually get to see it, especially as the Doctor can be so private. And I love getting to see it.

Loved the telepathy aspect of it too, just barely there, but still making a mention - you know I love telepathy from my reviews of Run with You series (which I'm sinfully behind on) and as I like to think of this as of cannon compliant to the aforementioned series, it's great to see them exploring this aspect of their future relationship on such an ... well, is it still an early start? They're taking things so slowly (and good for them they do) that I could say that.

Anyway, great story. I hope I'll get some time on my hands soon to read and review some more, but I don't see it much likely before January, maybe Fabruary. The Finals are coming. Thanks for your patience.

Have a lovely time and loads of luck writing!
Love, Eliška

So adorable and a sweet! Even made me feel better about the whole French whore fiasco. The Satan pit was always one of my favorite episodes after the Doctor dances :3

CUTE!

Just amazing and so beautiful!

Oh my gosh, thank you for writing that! I always wanted to know what they did after the adventure with the devil. It was such a suspenseful and heartbreaking one. Well, thanks for the one-shot and I hope you write more in the future! :)!