Reviews for Bachelor Mother |
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kyrarihanna chapter 1 . 12/23/2019 it is hilarious! especially when the king and queen arrived! hahaha can't stop laughing! you really did give the meaning of "misunderstand" to the whole new level.. few times feels like want to slap my forehead everytime this "misunderstood" thing reached a new person to the point all goku's family admit being the child father,,haha... very good story! loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2018 ooooooooh my god, this was so many kinds of delicious i can't even adorable and charming and hawt and i laughed out loud so many times i think it gave my health a boost thank you so much for sharing this fic! what an absolute treat |
GeraniumRyka154 chapter 1 . 12/23/2017 Genetically engineering anything is discussing and wrong! Things should stay natural! I don't see Bulma doing this to a living being. Plants? maybe. |
Writersblock42 chapter 1 . 12/22/2017 This was brilliant! Soooo funny and very well written. Loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2017 LOL second incubation period :D |
ScarletRaven1001 chapter 1 . 4/30/2017 Very entertaining story. Cracked me up. Loved the dynamic between Goku and Raditz. I specifically liked the line about naming conquered planets after Bulma. :) |
tea-chan of the shadowspirits chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 Love this story had me in stitches. |
nofcksgiven chapter 1 . 12/27/2016 This is one of the most brilliant and satisfying story I have ever read in the DBZ fandom. Hahaha, I can't believe ll this happen bc of one misunderstanding! The humor had me dying, lol. I LOVE EVERY SINGLE INTERACTIONS BETWEEN VEGETA AND BULMA! OMG, OTP at their best. And I actually enjoyed all the other characters. Nappa and Bardock are hilarious together. The women are complete badasses. I loved it! |
AergiaWorshiper chapter 1 . 11/5/2016 What can I say? Your sense of humor is simply delicious, and I laughed so hard I'm still crying. I dearly love a good comedy of errors, and this is the best I've read so far. Thank you for brightening a cold, dull afternoon with pure comedy gold. |
PandaApprovedxx chapter 1 . 6/24/2016 This. This is the fanfic I didn't know I wanted but am so happy to have found. Really, incredibly well done. I really love the way you got into Saiyan culture and the way you portrayed the characters. The comedy is genuinely hilarious! I was actually laughing out loud. Definitely a favourite. I want to see the movie this is based on now. :) |
Min's awesomeness chapter 1 . 5/16/2016 Ohhh I loved this! |
pansymoomalfoy32 chapter 1 . 5/4/2016 This is a fantastic story! Someone commented that it was like a Greek comedy and I completely agree. Farce upon farce upon farce! Hilarious. Loved the insight into your version of Saiyan culture. Loved your AU set up and how seamlessly you weaved background info into the tale. Great VB action and great character choices with the rest. Nappa, Bardock, and Raditz, then later the King all sharing an 'oh shit' moment was gold. Ditto with the moment Vegeta and Goku realized their misunderstanding and getting dressed down by Bulma and Chichi. What's especially great is how in character everyone stayed. All this drama and humor and humiliation and Vegeta esp but all the Saiyans kept their pride and composure front and center even though they were clearly freaking out! Haha. Loved the Queen and Bulma's mutual respect. About died laughing from the statue asses. (And from countless other moments) I had to shut my windows, I was laughing so hard, so often I was afraid I was scaring my neighbors. |
TyazViole chapter 1 . 4/21/2016 This story is well outside of the Dragon ball canon but it's amazing how you kept the essence of dbz through hilarious outbursts and reactions from the characters. I kept bursting out in laughter a lot as I read this story. I really enjoyed it. Great job! |
ladyunebarton chapter 1 . 4/13/2016 hahaha this was a joyfull ride of wtf after wtf like a greek comedy of sorts with sayains, humans and a baby. The Lemon was great. Thanks for writting. I would rec it |
lovesorrow chapter 1 . 4/4/2016 Bloody brilliant! Love it! Really good work, I'm still laughing about it, and the lemon bit was really hot! |