This was a good story I liked the action and the bits of humor that were there I will admit that I would have liked to have seen thanos team up with darkseid now that would be a really cool idea to see

Seems like iron man has to iron out some of his problems and yes I know that the joke sucks no need to comment on it

Character lines are still robotic, plenty of typos and misplaced speech notations and paragraph breaks, dry description of the events, badly placed flashbacks, and two huge plot holes:
Having so many different heroes be TEENAGERS, who go to THE SAME SCHOOL, who belong to multiple DIFFERENT organizations, which base I DIFFERENT, counties, is quite unlikely at best.
2nd... Canon Flash can kill Koro easily. Very easily, actually. His speed is uncapped. He can even go beyond the speed of light. This one shows both lacking of understanding of the character you used, and just how ridiculous Flash is (granted, the 2nd part is not actually your fault).

I really don't know how some of the reviewers can say in a straight face that this is one of the best things they've read. It might be better later, but with that kind of opening, it doesn't deserve the title regardless.
I'm out. I don't care if it does get better, the opening segment is too bad for me to bear. I'll see you never, and have a nice day.

What. I was holding this off because I thought it'd be good, but this first chapter is cringe inducing to the max:
The character likes are mechanical, with no feel in the whatsoever.
The story itself seems to be just ripping off Marvel, DC and whatever and shoving it into this without the proper Crossover tags.
This story needs a rewrite ASAP. Fixing the writing might still save it, even if the base premise is too cliché to really hit off.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Yussssssssss

*Klaue

Yes I knew it he went to Wakanda that’ll be ¥237 Karma

Ploooooot twiiiiiiiistt also can’t help but be a savage when you’re about to die

Please let the plot line be merciful

No why

Guys it’s the brother from the cops and robbers episode omg

Okay but if Ronan flew like Jessie, James, and Meowth that would have been amazing tbh

Was it fate? Or was it...
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KARMA?
*ba-dum-tss!*
(Never gets old XD)

Well, *peepo!*.
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WHAT THE *peepo!* IS WITH THE *peepo!*ING PEEPOS! AaAaAaRgHh