Charlotte is really a terrible match maker isn't she?
Gotta admit I had my doubts about this fanfiction but I decided to give it a chance and sure glad I did too! It's great. Yeoul's personality is gold, the bit about being a magnificent mermaid especially. Although I wonder why was she in the island and why she saved Sarutobi? Like. .. do she knows who the girl is? And does Sarutobi realise how close she is acting to a girl she barely knows?
Can't wait for next chapter and I sure hope there IS one!
Bye o/ *3

Can You Also Make Bios Of Your OCs Please?.

This was another great chapter

This is something like Valkyrie drive:mermaid anime.

First chapter looks interesting can't for the next one. Good to see someone write a story for this series beside that mass harem naruto crap that other author tried to write