These two chapters have been brilliant so far

this story is not well done.

sees baelish...well bring me the sword ı need it real quick

shame this wasnt continued: its been a delightful read

yea, I can see how killing baelish is the sensible course of action when you put it that way

petyr presents an interesting conundrum, on one hand the man is a genius, and one without any personal grudge against stannis like he has for Ned. On the other hand, in canon he built his power base on vice and graft, and thats not something that stan would want in his budding administration.

the maesters deserve to be knocked down a peg, democratization of knowledge ftw!

heres to capitalism and industry, and to you for not forgetting that those kind of changes arent always looked well upon by those in the thick of things

glad I gave this fic another shot, it continues to amuse

Seems like this whole story is on in 283

good story, keep writing

I really enjoyed the politicking and stuff in this story. I would love to see it continued sometime. It's unfortunate so many plot threads start when it stops though. I've only finished half of the last chapter for fear of cliff hangers that may never be answered, but maybe I'm just paranoid. I hope to be able to finish it with the next update.

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The fuck did he say?

That's twice you've cut away from the same fucking fight. And then you transition it into a bunch of time jumping rambling from a bunch of different characters.

You really did a poor job with POVs this story, but the original content itself wasn't bad.