Reviews for Making an Entrance
Dreamy and Books chapter 1 . 12/14/2018
I love how it kept switching between the view points... it just made the story so much better!
basiltonpitch chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
Holy shit, this was very good.
K chapter 1 . 7/21/2018
This is really, really good! Very realistic and well written too! Please write more!
Oliviareads chapter 1 . 8/16/2016
Really good 3
FizzingWhizzbee204 chapter 1 . 8/10/2016
I kinda want to see the entrance they make... Great story!
babyvfan chapter 1 . 7/14/2016
Nice job ;) very hot
Viviane Carstairs chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
"I think that ship has sailed" ahem.
sour-cherry-scones chapter 1 . 1/26/2016
Nice. Your writing is smooth and gripping, and I loved the ending! ;)