Dang
I really love the interactions between Flowey and Ed

Wow, this is really well-written! I think you portray Ed and Al very well, and it reminds me how much I love FMA. :) I just wish I was more familiar with Undertale so I'd have a better idea of what's going on.

please
Please. Finnish this.
I think it is very brave of you to put this in 2nd person but it is still well done.

Ahhh, even if unfinished, satisfying. I'm so glad Ed got a striped sweater out of all this.

I'm going into this knowing it's unfinished and... My god dude, this is your first time? The tone is phenomenal. I'm on the edge of my seat here, waiting for answers!

And second person Edward Elric. Now THAT'S an experience. What a unique and creative thing wrought from the love of two worlds.

So why haven't you continued this? It is nice so far. Plenty of snide, but funny remark and good flow with the story. Does get a little confusing telling who is speaking or thinking at a given point though. Your portrayal of the Elric brothers is close enough to be relatable and your portrayal of frisk and the surrounding environment is very memorable as well. I did like the fact that you included Frisk's use of save locations and Re-runs through the underground. All in all, I would very much enjoy seeing more of this story in the future.

Yes wear the striped sweater Ed. You have no choice

Great story, I hope you countine.

Ch 5 Woops Poor Froggit . Neutral Path .

Awesome!

lol, niice

You cant spell roasted without Ed XD

With the new math...imma now find all of the character's heights XD

There are a few issues.
1: The story's POV violates website guidelines. Guidelines state that no second POV stories are allowed. Only first POV and third POV stories are allowed.
2: The POV jumps around without warning, making it hard to tell whose perspective it is.
3: The events jump around, making the order of events confusing.

I love it keep up the good work