nice you should continues this.

Charming. I really like your stories. They're short but sweet. It feels like you get a lot of information across in a succinct way. I can tell I'm going to enjoy this. :)

I've read this before, and if I do enough research into my favorites I imagine ill find it. If your plagarizing this, this is your warning, take it down now.

The MOD theme is one of my favorites, thank you for sharing, I look forward to seeing more of this intriguing story. A suggestion: Make your chapters longer. A 1,000 words per chapter (wpc) is very short and it's difficult to convey much of your storyline and the reader immerse themself in so short a single posting. So, unless you post VERY frequently, reader interest flags. A lot of my FF friends don't even bother to read anything that isn't at least 1,500 words unless they know the author, most prefer a story to average around 2,000 wpc and I think 3,000 is some kind of sweet spot. Good luck with this project and, again, thanks for sharing!