Reviews for The Unfortunate Life of Neo
Guest chapter 11 . 8/25
I Finally found this again, Wish it was updated more
Guest chapter 11 . 8/13
Really dragging this one out huh? Also rape as a backstory is lazy writing.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/6
I would've at least slapped Yang. I dont do 'contempt'
Firestar001 chapter 11 . 6/29
Please continue this!
Zero chapter 11 . 12/12/2019
Finish story...do it.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
Acabo de encontrar tu fic y me encanta, me dejaste intrigada, vas a terminarlo?
play it by ear chapter 11 . 5/1/2019
HA

Oh this was a great chapter
sockman50 chapter 11 . 11/27/2018
its a nice story. been a while though you good?
Tamatoa chapter 11 . 3/23/2018
I hope by the end of this Neo slices Yang's throat and fucks her corpse.
ghost117239 chapter 11 . 8/4/2017
I really like this story a lot, and look forward to reading more! Amazing work!
Justabystander chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
This sstory so far is so out there it hurts. I like some character moments but with a school training children disciplined enough to fight a war, ALL of the people treating someone as badly as they do Neo would fly out faster then a speeding bullet. Ozpin is a troll but he isnt cruel. Basically whats happening in this story is torture, pure and simple. And as effective as a way it is to keep going so I feel sorry for the characters.. its disgusting.
bwburke94 chapter 11 . 7/11/2017
I can't decide which of Adam/Cardin deserves more to rot in hell. Maybe they can go out fighting each other? Anyway, more Neo is always good.
XanAuthorOfTheNightmare chapter 11 . 7/11/2017
Auuuuu... The woobie feels are strong with this one...
Guest chapter 10 . 7/10/2017
This is a story that perfectly fits what I like, and
I
NEED
MORE
Senpai the God chapter 10 . 7/9/2017
I just want Neo to kill Cardin now. Yang has dropped to my least favorite character spot right next to Weiss... Bitch. Still love how you portrayed their reactions. Keep. up the good work
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