Reviews for Restart
246vili chapter 15 . 8/7
Oh, so Jaune plan to wait till the attack during the Tournament to expose Cinder and Salem's group. I wasn't 100% sure he wanted to wait that long, considering there will be many things he's ought to change, changing other events with them as well.
Like the framing of Yang for attacking Mercury for example. If he stop that, Cinder might look for other ways to cause negativity and lure in Grimm.

Keep up the good work.
kkkking chapter 9 . 7/11
I WAS THINKING OF SAKAMOTO
kkkking chapter 1 . 7/11
big fo3 vibes here
Kevy The Chevy chapter 15 . 7/8
Having a great time especially the Grimm King just kind of messing with whatever Jaune is doing for the lolz.

He's like "I'm not going to just immediately kill all your friends, I'm just going to keep upping the stakes until you cause their deaths or lose yourself to bloodlust. Either way I'm going to get the fight of my life eventually and it's going to b C."
iwish328 chapter 15 . 7/5
II think retribution is the coolest weapon jaune has had in any rwby story ive seen and i think u have a lot of unnecessary explanations of stuff you either said in the story or people should know from watching the show. I also think the top little section doesn't really add much to the story especially considering like half of those sections are just jaune fighting the Grimm King. Its a pretty good story but honestly the only thing that was keeping me interested was whenever jaune pulled out a new form or ability for retribution.
iwish328 chapter 12 . 7/5
They should have killed her. This is why most travel stories don't work. Characters from the future are either so strong or they know so much about the enemies plan that they could easily beat the main enemies if they had any kind of plan. Jaune knows everybody that works for salem why doesn't he just hunt them down and kill them himself. The reason y is that we have to follow the original plot as much as possible for some reason.
DestinySkyDemon chapter 15 . 6/30
Jane's weapon reminding me of the iconic umbrella from The King's Avatar
DestinySkyDemon chapter 15 . 6/30
'The one you think is dead still walks among the livingO Who could it be? Summer? Grimm King?
BorderLand chapter 1 . 6/26
I blame the God of light.
Tetho chapter 5 . 6/13
HAH, I wouldn't be surprised if Jaune managed to get a harem y'know.
splash43 chapter 15 . 5/27
hey are you ever gonna update this story?
Dab4LIFE chapter 4 . 5/24
Update please!
shadowwolf20 chapter 4 . 4/25
If your still taking ideas for omakes for this I have a few ideas you can use
1. We see what his friends and family are thinking in heaven in the old timeline. Like what they think about him using their weapons on the Grimm King and the pain they caused him. (meant to be emotional maybe with a tad bit of humor)

2. Jaune and Pyrrha telll theirs families about their relationship (meant to be humorous and can be broken down into multiple parts if desired)

's thoughts before heading back to Beacon and finding out Jaune came back with her as well (emotional)

4. Jaune and Pyrrha make a bet about something where the loser has to do a sexy dance for the winner (humorous and would prefer it if Jaune loses the bet if you do this one so Pyrrha can hold it over him but would be fine)

5. another part where Ruby tries to figure out Jaune's weapon (humor)

6. Jaune and Pyrrha sleeping together (romantic comedy and doesn't have to be sexual)

7. Jaune finds out Pyrrha when she was a ghost in the old timeline was checking him out in the shower and maybe makes a joke about it to embarrass here(maybe says something around the line of so you like what you saw) (meant to be humorous )

This is all I have for now I hope you make omakes out of them or use for future chapters. Also I hope you update more frequently fics like Knight of the fallen order lone wolf because I like those stories the most.
ankitmahat chapter 5 . 3/11
I'm really starting to hate your Jaune as he acts like a beta male. A pity too as this story started so well. But you've thoroughly ruined it over the past few chapters and I just can't read it anymore.
Goodbye.
ankitmahat chapter 2 . 3/10
Oh god. This is exactly what I was afraid of. A chapter full of baby Jaune as he makes plans for the 'future'. First chapter was awesome, no doubt about that but I had to skim 90% of this chapter in order to get through it. Just hope you'll do some time skips soon enough so we can get to the juicy parts.
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