This is where you end off? That's just cruel.

Really hope this is updated, l wanna see their reaction to Shirou's weapons lol

Ok, I liked the story idea, but now I think it’s getting a little out of hand.
Saber is too OP. Is she insanely strong? Yes. Can she kick several demigods’ asses at once? Yes. But she’s not so insanely powerful that she can singlehandedly overwhelm about 50 demigods, including several of the best fighters in the PJO universe, with EASE.
Also, Saber is being unreasonably OOC when she cuts off Jason’s arm for basically no reason. They didn’t actually hurt Rin— they only said to STAY where she was if she didn’t want Rin to get hurt. It might be understandable for her to take a hostage (which it isn’t really because she’s an honorable knight and that would be OOC), but immediately lopping off said hostage’s arm and further breaks her “honorable knight” character.
And finally, Saber should be the one who realizes the best that THEY (FSN cast) are the most at fault. They captured a demigod and tried to experiment on him, attacked his friends and family (also demigods) who rightfully tried to save him IN A PEACEFUL MANNER, followed after them into their home turf when they really didn’t need to to, and attacked the 50 demigods who were friends with the one they captured while damaging their base (the ship) when they were literally in the same position the demigod they captured had been in (ah yes, because FSN cast can’t accept a reason but PJO cast absolutely MUST accept that same exact reason. Right.) Said demigods who are rightfully angry are trying to bring FSN cast in to erase their memories because they HAVE TO, just like Magus society, but Saber brutally injures 50 teenagers and literally cuts off the arm of one barely with reason. How could FSN cast NOT be in the wrong?

Oh wow, Zeue is about to drop the master bolt to London.

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Nope that aren't divine construct divine construct required faith and concepts IE. Excalibur concept :victory ,so to shirou stgian iron sword is just sword with exotic material

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Seriously saber can throw PJO God like ragdoll her feat prove that and there aren't PJO character feat that can compete with her so OP what are you talking about? And fate Herakles is alot better than PJO one (Percy crew ran away from PJO Herakles not defeated him)

Is is a great story! You made sure that he stuff actually fit canon, and not just whatever story you liked more. So is is good in my books.

nixes you are actually wrong there. No Percy did not defeat Hercules, he RAN away from him. There is way too many fanfics where they make PJO way too strong for how their universe works. Saber wins since she's a HEROIC SPIRIT, which means that she is naturally stronger than most of the PJO cast. Then again, I can't say anything since I currently don't have a proper account here.

Shirou can't replicate Divine constructs. And Stygian Iron is more-or-less a divine construct. Get your facts straight

Honestly, she defeating the seven just isn't possible. Yes, she was made over powered in the anime but the two books are from two different universes using two different power system. If we are just talking about merging Universes, Percy has defeated Hercules. Saber had a hard time doing it. They have fought Titans, Giants and Primordials. Every one of them easily able to rip these guys apart.

You are allowing Heroic Spirits to fight and over power People who regularly fight Divine Spirits? Fuck, if we are just talking about Nasuverse characteristics, just their Divinity would make most of the things impossible.

Saber is to much overpowered, like cmon percy almost won against kronos, he was in the fucking tartarus and saber beated him like he was shit

Was that Meg at the end, that means Apollo right, so he could probably help heal Jason. Rin should also know healing magecraft since she has experienced Shirou's brand of stupidity in saving people. Where in the timeline are we right now? Please update don't let it stay in a cliffhanger

Really interesting read. Enjoyed the fight scenes, really feels like the fight would’ve happened like that. Balance wise I think you’re on the right track. There’s no way any demigod can fight against a servant, especially one at Sabers caliber. Wished to see a bit more of Shirou fighting, I feel like that would be more of an interesting fight, rather than the curb stomp saber gave them. Dialogue is very engaging, nice cliffhanger. Don’t know why I’m reviewing, but if you haven’t left this story to die yet an update would be awesome.

Fun story. Too bad you dropped it. I can see that you got a lot of criticism for balance/adherence to Canon, but you simply can't satsfy all the fans and one way or another some thing to argue about Will Come up. Thank you for the read, anyway.

I'll be honest, I was skeptical about the idea. But I found myself quickly enjoying your story. You have a good grasp of how Riordan writes his stories and it shows in your sentence structuring. The fight scenes were quite well done and I could picture everything perfectly. I only wish we'd get some Shirou action soon.

I hope you update soon. I know it's been a while. I can see why writing this story might be difficult later down the line. Once Greek gods and mages come into play, things can get messy. This crossover is certainly more ambitious than others, but i think the payoff is equally rewarding. I had a blast reading this.

Also, great power balance. I think you were pretty fair. Servants, especially Saber, are overpowered by their very nature. Fledgling modern teenage demigods vs Full-fledged Heroic Spirits. Yeah, definitely on team Fate...

The Jason losing an arm thing is a real big agitator, might only fuel the conflict more. But it seems like everyone would settle down after Saber showed her dominance. Anyway, in the Nasuverse, decapitated limbs can be reattached, I think? I remember there being magecraft for that in the Clock Tower. So, there should still be chance of reconciliation.

Continuing from my previous review the strongest Magi from the Age of Gods are kinda like Sadie and Carter Kane in the first books hosting gods except they are full on reality warpers that could spam near True Magic spells like its normal, kinda like the Pseudo-servants in FGO like with Rin withIshtar and Ereshkrigal and Luvia with Astraea. Like imagine Shirou with the blessings from Hephaestus to let him not only trace divine weapons but also create powerful weapons. If Rin could play it right and get a boon from Hecate or any god it would be a very big plus to her and the future of the association.

How would the Gods react to Saber? If we go by F/Extella she saved the World from Sefar after it kicked the asses of almost every pantheons including the Olympians, it was even stated that Sefar took Ares' sword from him. From Grand Order, in Babylonia Artemis and the various goddesses there along with the Interlude of Artemis they remark about Saber being the "Holy sword wielder" and presented deep respect for her. Maybe that is why they said to be wary of her or any servant because they are humanity's protectors and if the Gods would get too rowdy and controlling to humanity it would deploy them, kinda like in Grand Order after Goteia burned all timelines and realms effectively killing even all the other gods and considering Artemis joins the fight there she would very much know.

Sad we don't get to see Rider here, because if this is a fusion universe she could have the PJO!Medusa's memories and would probably tease Percy and Annabeth or maybe completely terrify them.

Hope this would update